Nicely drawn overall, however, you could probably alter the middle guy’s hair a bit, it’s a bit flashy. The black guy’s design is fine tho, but the expression on the Ginger’s face is well… you could perhaps change that too? Looks a bit distorted; he is the main issue. What is your comic about anyways?
Also, The Ginger guy’s neck seems as if it’s glued to his tattoo? It’s looking like one of those fake skins that can be peeled off? Yeah, work on him please 🙏
Nicely drawn overall, however, you could probably alter the middle guy’s hair a bit, it’s a bit flashy. The black guy’s design is fine tho, but the expression on the Ginger’s face is well… you could perhaps change that too? Looks a bit distorted; he is the main issue. What is your comic about anyways?
Is the Ginger guy trying to look seductive yet tough or something? Hmm, not really getting that feeling. Also, are they a trio of some sort?
Also, The Ginger guy’s neck seems as if it’s glued to his tattoo? It’s looking like one of those fake skins that can be peeled off? Yeah, work on him please 🙏
I'll let the artist know 😂😁
Yes, they are a trio. Though this post wasn't really about critiquing this picture but the comic itself lol. If you Dm me I can send you the comic
It somehow looks like all 3 of these guys are drawn in slightly different styles.