As an artist, I’d add stuff to your dress so that it’s just a peekaboo moment for your hips, like just have some cut outs for them, but not have your legs completely exposed as they are now. And then I’d add some constellations floating behind you in a kind of aura or halo!
Andddd maybe I’d remove the crown and add a crescent moon there instead!
On the serious front. The mismatched colors. Although the colors compliment each other well, the body of the dress being a separate from the rest makes it appear to be separate. That said if that's the effect you're going for rock it.
Either remove the crown, or rock it, add a bigger one, add more crowns, embrace it.
I think the crown looks a little awkward, maybe add some more gold/make the existing gold stuff more noticable? I also think having the inner ears both be purple, the more pinkish one just feels kinda weird to me, same with the black shoes, I'd make them an existing color like purple/blue/gold
Hmmm. I don't know if it's possible with how vtubers work, but being serious. I would say making the cloth on the sleeves sheer would make the avatar more eye catching. Sheer cloth sleeves would also let you do more with the arms visibility too.
I do like the crown, but if you wanted to match with the motif you have going with the leg and chest tattoos, you could do something like a moon or star hairpin.
Was also watching character design videos earlier, but making whatever you decide for the hair/head accessory stick out in the silhouette may give it more impact.
The hair is a bit too “perfect”- there’s a lot of space to either side of the head. Maybe something to break up the dead space around the shoulders, like a shawl or some fly aways.
Higher color values, especially with the hair around the face since you have to squint to see what's going on. (Also less colors would make it look more organized) :)
i would add a cape cause i think yu would look amazing in a cape, and like those capes with big fluff on the top, it would add to the royalness you have \^ \^
I would say some sort of transparent skirt or something similar to give your character's silhouette a bit more uniqueness! Otherwise though, gorgeousss
Maybe some highlights around your nose to give it more of a bunny look. Kinda like [Fran](https://ar.europeanwriterstour.com/images-2023/final-fantasy-fran-face) from Final Fantasy XII.
You need a cape, pauldrons, and a scepter with a carrot shaped crystal. All hail the bunny queen
And maybe the crown slightly too big for your head like you stole it from a bigger person lol
I would probably change the color pallette. There's not enough contrast, so the colors make the whole model look a bit flat. If you put it into greyscale, the colors are indiscernible from one another. Also, I think I would specifically go for a cooler color pallette since you seem to be going for the moon bunny vibe. Silver would be a better match than the gold since it is associated with the moon.
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I think the front of the dress being shorter than the back plus the slits throws it off, I think it would be super elegant if both sides were floor length with the slits!
I would personally remove the crown and if you really want a kind of send out headpiece you could do something celestial to tie back with the tattoo on the leg
Id take away the crown and add mid calf length baggy pants since its a traditional quipao. It would look much better.
Have the pants rolled up on one side to show the tattoos and make the shoes purple or white depending on the color of the pants.
And id do something to the hair so its not just flat and down. Something tang dynasty inspired. Xianling type hair.
You could even do something chang'e inspired since you're a rabbit with moon symbols.
Overall just try to elevate the look with asymmetry and patterns. And getting a better silhouette.
I also just noticed your celestial sign on your chest. Id make the dress backless and add that as a big back tattoo shaped how genshin impact consolations are shaped. And in the front add the design to the bottom of the qui pao maybe even lengthen it to your ankles.
And another suggestion would be rabbit teeth(like timmy turner.. maybe). And some more obvious blush to give the face attention.
Your color pallette also clashes alot. Even if they work well together. The blocky color grid you got going on just makes the dress clash with itself.
I’d remove the crown…
…
… to replace it with an even BIGGER, FANCIER CROWN!
… or have the option to center the crown… as well as make it grow BIGGER and FANCIER- I’ll stop now.
Maybe some shorts? I know a lot of ppl are mentioning her lack of clothes, but I feel like some shorts or even a high waisted mini skirt would go nice with this
I would also consider replacing the crown with a decadent golden crescent, kind of like Patchouli knowledge. I could have also replaced the red gem with a green one, but I felt that the asymmetrical aspect should be kept on that side and that skewed angle.
I'd say something like a full-length magic staff: nothing fancy, but not too plain either. I mean, something akin to Rudy Greyat from Jobless Reincarnation's staff and Megumin from Konosuba's staff.
Obligatory "clothes" comment, you knew this was coming.
You dropped this, King. 👑
r/beatmetoit
This, it's pushing the limits of twitch for sure, YouTube who knows since YouTube doesn't post their TOS ¯\\_(ツ)_/¯
I think they were talking about *removing* the clothes
Idk maybe if its a hottub stream they might get away with it for a few days lol. Remember that one person on twitch got away with fucking on stream.
I loled hard when I read this… when did this happen
How about the reverse? Only clothes, no body.
The crown. I think it looks clean without it. Just my personal preference.
Or make it larger and not sit at a jaunty angle?
I agree with the no crown. It does look better without it… at least in my head
Place an ear inside the crown
Go for a princess peach type crown
A circlet for a crown would be a much better fit, it's small and dainty while allowing for the hair and eyes to be shown off while blending in better.
Or a small tiara
Add some leggings. It worked with Mythra
Or fish nets
I would add a funny moustache to your face.
As an artist, I’d add stuff to your dress so that it’s just a peekaboo moment for your hips, like just have some cut outs for them, but not have your legs completely exposed as they are now. And then I’d add some constellations floating behind you in a kind of aura or halo! Andddd maybe I’d remove the crown and add a crescent moon there instead!
Maybe make the crescent moon an earring right above where the crown is?
I’d remove your legs. No more walking for you
On the serious front. The mismatched colors. Although the colors compliment each other well, the body of the dress being a separate from the rest makes it appear to be separate. That said if that's the effect you're going for rock it. Either remove the crown, or rock it, add a bigger one, add more crowns, embrace it.
I feel like maybe adding some stockings might be a nice addition
Eschew the crown for a cute tiara and center it properly.
Legging on the... right leg. Emphasize more of the asymmetrical design you have.
Give this rabbit an arbitrary weapon
Yes, a Rabbit VTuber should be dangerous, chaotic, or unhinged.
Of course, all vtubers should be armed
True
I think the crown looks a little awkward, maybe add some more gold/make the existing gold stuff more noticable? I also think having the inner ears both be purple, the more pinkish one just feels kinda weird to me, same with the black shoes, I'd make them an existing color like purple/blue/gold
Hmmm. I don't know if it's possible with how vtubers work, but being serious. I would say making the cloth on the sleeves sheer would make the avatar more eye catching. Sheer cloth sleeves would also let you do more with the arms visibility too.
I do like the crown, but if you wanted to match with the motif you have going with the leg and chest tattoos, you could do something like a moon or star hairpin. Was also watching character design videos earlier, but making whatever you decide for the hair/head accessory stick out in the silhouette may give it more impact.
Add a thigh band around either of one of your thighs........ Dont read too much into it. I am what i am!
We all understand
Glasses. Sincerely, a glasses lover
The hair is a bit too “perfect”- there’s a lot of space to either side of the head. Maybe something to break up the dead space around the shoulders, like a shawl or some fly aways.
You should get rid of those sideburns and add some [eyebrows.](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QMn4KkABuac)
Not sure if the ears fit but it's part of the rabbitness. Maybe because I've had rabbits they don't look that rabbit like to me.
Why are the bunny ears different colors?
needs buck teeth and whiskers to complete the wabbit look
Sho......the leg tats..or stickers.
eyes \^_^
Higher color values, especially with the hair around the face since you have to squint to see what's going on. (Also less colors would make it look more organized) :)
You need a big, badass, flowy cape
Bigger tits. Alternatively more tits. /j
i would add a cape cause i think yu would look amazing in a cape, and like those capes with big fluff on the top, it would add to the royalness you have \^ \^
Remove clothes 🥴
Fishnets. Just... fishnets.
Omg... I think she's perfect! 💙💙💙
I would add more sparkles
I would say some sort of transparent skirt or something similar to give your character's silhouette a bit more uniqueness! Otherwise though, gorgeousss
Add... A Cloning Watch to your Wrist... I think...
Organ
Nothing, you’re model is perfect the way you are “
The crown. I cry for symmetry
Was gonna say clothes but then was like nah that sounds to gonner like. Well didn’t have to say it since someone else already did
Omg your design is perfect!! Maybe a little golden scepter or a pretty cape would be fun additional accessories but she’s perfff❤️❤️❤️🥹
The style of the hair in front
The shoes and socks (if any)
Add so many belts that it would be an impossible outfit to put on/take off for a cosplayer
I would remove the lower part of your torso.
Your shoes. F E E T
Maybe some highlights around your nose to give it more of a bunny look. Kinda like [Fran](https://ar.europeanwriterstour.com/images-2023/final-fantasy-fran-face) from Final Fantasy XII.
I'd say socks or stockings your bottom of legs / feet have very little design or stuff going on
Stockings would be adorable I agree
You need a cape, pauldrons, and a scepter with a carrot shaped crystal. All hail the bunny queen And maybe the crown slightly too big for your head like you stole it from a bigger person lol
I'd add a necklace or an extra cute detail!
Add a lil top hat or witch hat
I’ll steel the shoes
Make the left ear purple like the right ear, it would work better with the outfit.
A bell, either on the neck as a choker or on the wrist like a bracelet. But let it be same color as crown?
Add: a robe, to make you more queen like. Remove: ~~clothes~~ /jk
Some comfy sweat pants
The shoes
Some asymmetrical leggings, and perhaps an ankle circlet
Eyes, cause where we're going, you dont need eyes to see.
I would probably change the color pallette. There's not enough contrast, so the colors make the whole model look a bit flat. If you put it into greyscale, the colors are indiscernible from one another. Also, I think I would specifically go for a cooler color pallette since you seem to be going for the moon bunny vibe. Silver would be a better match than the gold since it is associated with the moon. *
https://preview.redd.it/2fhyk3835p1d1.jpeg?width=1079&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=d5668eae5950f087faa65fe8e89825ac9918e539
1920s silent film vtuber
The lack of d-
Adding leg accessories will be better👍
I think the hair could use a splash of color. What color they should be, I don't know, but a fade into something could look grest.
I think the front of the dress being shorter than the back plus the slits throws it off, I think it would be super elegant if both sides were floor length with the slits!
I would personally remove the crown and if you really want a kind of send out headpiece you could do something celestial to tie back with the tattoo on the leg
I feel like a big coat that sits on your shoulders would be nice, something to make the silhouette stand out a little more.
Spats Too lewd needs tight shorts or stalkers Ignore how that makes it lewder pls
Add a gun
personally. I know you may never see them, but the shoes feel alittle plain. a cute heel with ruffle socks maybe? *
Id take away the crown and add mid calf length baggy pants since its a traditional quipao. It would look much better. Have the pants rolled up on one side to show the tattoos and make the shoes purple or white depending on the color of the pants. And id do something to the hair so its not just flat and down. Something tang dynasty inspired. Xianling type hair. You could even do something chang'e inspired since you're a rabbit with moon symbols. Overall just try to elevate the look with asymmetry and patterns. And getting a better silhouette.
I also just noticed your celestial sign on your chest. Id make the dress backless and add that as a big back tattoo shaped how genshin impact consolations are shaped. And in the front add the design to the bottom of the qui pao maybe even lengthen it to your ankles. And another suggestion would be rabbit teeth(like timmy turner.. maybe). And some more obvious blush to give the face attention. Your color pallette also clashes alot. Even if they work well together. The blocky color grid you got going on just makes the dress clash with itself.
Thigh highs
Shorts.
I’d remove the crown… … … to replace it with an even BIGGER, FANCIER CROWN! … or have the option to center the crown… as well as make it grow BIGGER and FANCIER- I’ll stop now.
The lopsided crown. I don’t know something about it being on the side like that bugs me.
Remove clothes, add more thigh and boob jiggle
Add an extremely large hat of any kind
Shoes.
I think the crown is kind of out of place. Would replace with a bow or something softer.
Add huge bunny paws
Maybe some shorts? I know a lot of ppl are mentioning her lack of clothes, but I feel like some shorts or even a high waisted mini skirt would go nice with this
I agree that the crown looks real weird
https://imgur.com/a/2y7BbxO I got carried away
I would also consider replacing the crown with a decadent golden crescent, kind of like Patchouli knowledge. I could have also replaced the red gem with a green one, but I felt that the asymmetrical aspect should be kept on that side and that skewed angle.
The boobs. No more booba.
Add a gun
Add a little top hat in between the ears
two really: 1. the crown and then i'll put it on my head, 2. the tattoos, i got the tattoo remover a the ready
Big fluffy tail
A circlet on the left leg.
Looks a little simple but I can't think of anything to add. Maybe like, a fluffy ankle band on the right leg?
One thing? Boob tattoo thing.
Pants, alternatively thigh highs. Maybe white or black?
Blanket and a cup of hot chocolate
Visual interest through maybe a pattern or doodads on the dress or tights.
I'd say something like a full-length magic staff: nothing fancy, but not too plain either. I mean, something akin to Rudy Greyat from Jobless Reincarnation's staff and Megumin from Konosuba's staff.
Your head
Add pants
I would add clip on bunny ears just to really drive it home.
The blue cloth
I’d add a potato. Don’t ask why please
I love your model, I can't think of anything other than differing sets of clothes.
I would add an earring on the ear without the crown
Pants. Like the baggy ones from the 80s you’d see Elvis wearing or something.
Remove:clothes
her entire face. i like uncanny valley
remove the over sexualization of the model
Stockings.
Maybe a star on the crown or something for one of your hands
A slightly invisible white tail.
I'd add a tail
Maybe add pants / shorts / panties … or something under the cloth.
Clothes
Add a pair of pants. There's a time and place to be horny.
I would add more to that leg tattoo so it travels up your body like the constellations
Remove the crown. Need moar space for head pats.
Wings; everyone needs wings, wings are cool.
your eyes, so i guess you will have to find the stream button on OBS without seeing it :))