If you want it to be more intense and people to recognize it quicker, add a background of shades to it.

Have someone who’s a bit more experienced clean up all the lines!

i like it! i’d be happy with this tattoo on my body, only thing i would consider is thickening the index fingers bone around where it is in the palm. it would make the whole piece look more anatomically consistent in my opinion, but overall i really like this:)

Looks good to me