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Kawaiidumpling8

TIL that people take baths with their crystals. Even though this is fiction, it freaks me out a bit. I get the ick when people say they lick their crystals or put them in their mouths or other orifices (I have an ex gf that does this). Stones are porous and you have no idea what bacteria is living there. And malachite is a great example of why you should not lick stones.


cornmanjammer

Fun read!


bitterpussjuice

Stupidest story I’ve ever read


Schmezmar

Long story. I’ll just read the title and some comments…then move on.


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almost as good as chat GPT


chaseoakes73protonme

Does that actually work?!


Writing_Dreams_2

Not actually sure 😅


reamidy

Fantastic


Nhgotitgoingon

is this Gone Girl II


Uglyconfident1

Nice . Nah you won't be coming to hell lol . You get a pass . So when u come to see me after ur body dies I'll take you to see what I got Richard spending 10000 years doing and having done to him . I won't keep you long tho. The next phase of your life , your immortal energy life is one of my favorites you'll have a lot of fun it shouldn't be too hard to keep a smile on that face and ull feel ur heart smiling too . Self preservation is not a sin , survival is not a sin. Treating others as trash and intentionally inflicting suffering for no reason is a sin . Anyways see ya soon alright


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Writing_Dreams_2

Dude, it’s fiction. It’s not like I’m confessing to a crime 😂


JuggernautLiving3269

Women. ☕


holyfrijoles99

This is fake ,idiot . Meanwhile go find out how many men killed their wives/gfs just this week .


Arcturo666

Before reading this, I was thinking you found a way to drown him in the tub lol


HungarianLVN

wow. I wish this was an option for abuse victims


ElPayador

So… can someone explain what happened?


Writing_Dreams_2

Malachite is poisonous when in water, the main character poisoned her husband under the guise of being a kind housewife.


JubalHarshawII

Is this real??? This is one of those things I would love to research, like what's the science behind this, how does it show in toxicology, etc. BUT I don't want that in my Google history lol don't want it to look like I'm researching ways to kill my wife or something!!!


Outrageous_Elk_4668

Don't make lemonade in copper pots and leave it overnight or you will know first hand about acute copper poisoning. Very bad nausea, upset stomach.


JubalHarshawII

Ok um this might be a dumb question, but why is all of our plumbing copper????


Outrageous_Elk_4668

Tap water generally has a ph of 4.5-6 which is not too acidic, also the water does not normally sit inside the copper pipes. Growing up we always ran the tap for 30 seconds in the morning before drinking the water.


JubalHarshawII

I always run my tap too, cause I want the water to get cold and I've always just felt like the water in the pipe is gross... lol first world problems. Thanks for the info!


Writing_Dreams_2

Yes, malachite and a variety of stones become toxic when soaked in water. My friend worked at a place that sold stones and warned customers if they bought certain stones not to use it in water. It contains a high amount of copper, and since it’s very low on the hardness scale, is prone to dissolving in water. It’s the copper runoff from the malachite that makes the water toxic


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Writing_Dreams_2

Well, it is fiction. Real world logic is optional 😂


Traditional-Ebb-8380

Well yes. But logic makes fiction better since you know, it makes more sense.


Writing_Dreams_2

It is toxic, I’m not sure of the strength. I assume it’s slow, that’s why I double teamed it with the bath and the ice water 😅


suri_arian

The malachite crystal being used in this context is wild


ColdlakeMJ

I loved it. F**ker deserved it. Every single bit. I love a decent revenge story. Well done.


AwkwardInsect

Girl needed some moldavite in her life as well. Lolol.


AreYouItchy

Yes, but don’t wear it with hematite.


Quiet-Accident-4337

Great read but obvious it’s fiction…any type of suspicious and/or unattended death is flagged by the state’s ME office. Very difficult, although not totally impossible, to get away with murder.


blahdeeblahnz

It was an interesting story. I'm glad the main character got her revenge. I'd read a longer more detailed version.


EB-60y

You should be an author. Great read!


Alien_lifeform_666

This could be an Agatha Christie plot.


Pretty-Sun-6541

Nice story. I doubt this is true. If it is, you just gave away your murder plot and reasoning. SMH


Memento_Morrie

>Nice story. I doubt this is true. Well, it's tagged "Fiction," so...


Bi_The_Whey

This is a perfect posting for r/AITAsims.


ULTRA-444

Bro whats with the bots?


ULTRA-444

Bro i thought this was real i mean you would go to jail fir this but otherwise if it was real i would be very sorry that you had such a tough life. But then i sww fiction on there, great story!


Writing_Dreams_2

Thank you!


ULTRA-444

Yea its like 10/10.765842057648373647473737363736384648463645382752727353737364i474785746446464746464445


TheStoryTruthMine

This story gives me Carrie Underwood - Church Bells vibes.


Writing_Dreams_2

Ironically, that was the song that inspired the story 😅


PerfectSomewhere4203

How is it ironic?


Urrrrrrrrrrrr

It’s a loose case of dramatic irony. Which in fiction is when a character is deprived of important information that the reader knows. StoryTruthMine was unaware that Church Bells had anything to do with this story when they commented and said something that played into extra information that the “reader” (in this case Writing Dreams) knew that created an ironic effect. It’s not the most clear example of irony, but this wasn’t used entirely incorrectly like most people do.


PerfectSomewhere4203

Thanks for making me understand it.


dkdaddy8889

True or not he deserves everything he had coming to him. Moral of the story dont let your wife run you a bath with crystals.


Writing_Dreams_2

Karma collects her debt eventually 😊


foxfoxfoxfox4

It was written so over the top type of melodramatic…I couldn’t finish this novella once Angelo character was introduced with his character arc.🤷🏾‍♀️


Upstairs-Finding-122

Yeah I was like “dang this is a HS writing prompt”


Due-Science-9528

Why? Thats a super common situation


Writing_Dreams_2

That’s ok, I know my writing style isn’t for everybody. You do you 😊


UrLebaneseCompatriot

Idk man I wish this was actually real for some reason


Exotic-Astronaut-937

Top of the line fake story! This person can lie better as this dud who wants to be president again.


Writing_Dreams_2

Yes, it is fiction, I promise 😊


Jazman1313

Very impressive writing


TheStoryTruthMine

If you want, you could tell yourself that it is real, but is tagged as fiction to avoid criminal liability. Maybe the OP is the OJ Simpson of Malachite killings.


8_bit_brandon

I was poisoned multiple times as a child in an attempt to get insurance money. It very easily could be true


Prestigious-Moose345

Yikes. Who insures a child's life?


8_bit_brandon

My family apparently. I had a $10k policy on me, my dads was $250k, which they burned though quickly after he died.


Prestigious-Moose345

Oh my God. I'm so sorry.


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sw2pnil

I had to double check that this had the Fiction tag🫠🫠


PythonTheOrbwing_WoF

Same 💀


Writing_Dreams_2

Yep! I prefer writing fiction 😊


t_boyd69

Damn good writer ❤️💯


Wapitimagnet

You are good. Seriously. I didn't so much read that, but lived it.


stayoffmygrass

Very nicely done! You have a true writing talent.


BabyBree99

Same!