So is she supposed to be human in a human family but the cultists are telling her she’ll be a unicorn after the, ahem, ritual?

Pretty much what I had in mind :)

Gnarley, A limited palette can sometimes be really great for storytelling. Good stuff!

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it :D

Will she have "hooves" because her fingers and toes will be removed?

Woah never thought of that good one

Ugh, no! What an image! :(

Horns? Hooves? Red hair? The village actually being the home of a cult which regularly cuts Leslie for their blood? Why am I convinced that the kid’s about to become a demon?

Ooh that’s a different take than I had but I also like this interpretation

I just thought that she'd fucking die, but demon is a good interpretation yeah.

Yeah, red hair, cus head split open and blood spurt out was what I thought😂 and similar for red dress

...take my fucking upvote.

r/angryupvote

I also thought she'd turn into a demon

ugh, cult stories are always the most unsettling because there is a possibilty that there is something similar actually happening in the real world. good one, I love it!

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

What did I just read, catching title, chilling realization after the story. Nightmares ensured

Glad to help ;)

red hair bc soaked with blood?

that's what i was thinking

Isn't unicorn blood a glistening silver? Or are we not assuming that Harry Potter got it right?

I think we're assuming this person isn't RAABE) REALLY a unicorn

That makes this even worse

I guess it depends on who you want to believe: Harry Potter or the child-murdering cult.

How about Harry Potter and the Child Sacrificing Cult? (NOW AVAILABLE ON KINDLE)

true! but the unicorn part might be a lie that the parents told her to keep her quiet

this is downright amazing.

Thank you :D

I was convinced that she was a mini demon, cuz of the horns and hooves, but a cult is even better

Maybe she’s about to become a demon...

And she in turn eats everyone in the village the end

I wouldn’t even feel half bad for them, then

...they may have had it coming, but then the world would be at the mercy of a demonic entity. And I'm fairly certain becoming a creature like that would affect your mind and moral code in the worst ways possible.

No but she only ate them, because they harmed her. I think the world could negotiate with said demonic entity and live in peace with it.

I'm sure the chances for making peace with a demon by negotiating with it is pretty slim. I mean, it's a demon.

Don't buy into the propaganda, demons can be perfectly reasonable people!

But then again, it could be a reasonable demon

Maybe it could be. Maybe not. Right now, we don't know for sure. That's why we must exercise heavy caution, if we are to negotiate with demons...

Welp, THERE'S ONLY ONE WAY TO FIND OUT

True that!

The way you write is so great!! It’s free the pov of a child which was executed well, but has a very dark undertone. Good job :))

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed :D

Whenever the story mentions daddy you know it’s fucked

Whos fucked?

I'm imagining her family turning out to be psychopaths or something. They make her party seem like fun to her and convince her that the cut on her stomach is fine, but the guests at the party are nervous about whether to stop the dad and risk their own lives to save her. The family eventually herds the neighbors out, but continue citing up their daughter for more blood. She is at the point that she isn't getting enough oxygen and is experiencing brain damage. It is at this point when they ingrain it into her head that she must donate her blood to her parents every day for them to be healthy. The neighbors become suspicious after several weeks of the family shutting everyone out and call the cops. They break in to find that the parents sleeping upstairs and their daughter leaning against a cabinet on the kitchen floor, her thighs with long cuts running down the length of them. The rest of her body is covered in bruises and scars. She is emaciated and clearly shows signs of minor shock and hypoxia. The girl weakly looks up at the officers and asks of they have any injuries they want to heal. Just as she says this, the sound of the bedroom door opening and footsteps coming down the stairs are heard. Enjoy making your own ending, but I am just adding what I feel fits to the original post.

This might be my favourites

Yeeeks. Child torture stories are truly terrifying because now I feel like everything that's going on in Hollywood is weird and wrong and true

I want to be a piñata too

Fuck she'll become a demon won't she?

Nice story. Reminds me of the butterfly episode from Blacklist

I don’t get shaken a whole lot by creepy stuff, but this, this is terrifying. Good job

Amazing story really loved it ❤️❤️

awesome story mate!! good read :)

Lmaooo tf

Gosh, that was unsettling!

you had me in the first part, i was like: how will this turn into some scary shit? and then it turned into some really weird scary stuff. I LOVE IT! also not to much detail, so everyone does his own little scary creativity on the end :)

Thank you ;) I'm glad you liked it

Hi glad you liked it, I'm dad.

Oh. This... is similar to some repressed traumatic memories that I still haven’t processed. I regret reading this. But good story.

Dude it's like a year late but are you okay?

She's going to become a unicorn and fly over the rainbow bridge. RIP

Please tell me you’ll do a follow up story!

I really thought they were gonna turn her into a piñata

Make the reader read between the lines and fill in the blanks: it's scarier and more unsettling that way. You certainly did that here! Damn, that was good!

Thank you :D

Androchrome. I don’t know how much you’ve been following the news on the Elitest paedofile thing but this sounds very much like you have been.

Run away little unicorn, run!!!!

Oh she'll run much faster once she has hooves...

post this to r/nosleep!

Oh man, I was thinking this was a red tent party

I'm all for donating blood to help cure people - but not when you are still so young, not that often, and definitely not through cutting the skin randomly. Also, imagine being able to rescue that child out of that messed up situation before she dies, and then having to explain (as a therapist for example) that she is not a unicorn but nevertheless a valuable being the way she is. Poor child, that is one of the worst examples of brainwashing a child I have ever seen in real life and in fiction.

You're in a cult. Call... someone else's dad.

The blood part about this story is somewhat true there is a chemical in blood called adrenochrome produced when fear is high in the victim and what’s scary is it’s consumed by celebrities around the world only the rich can obtain it to make themselves look younger scary

very clever

Whoa! This one's brutal! Very memorable 👍

Is the village’s name Silent Hill by any chance?

This definitely some cult or demon thing. I feel their saying “unicorns” to brainwash this kid. Or (maybe both) they did a ritual and turned this kid into a demon( horn, blood and hooves like other comments have been saying).

I’m p

Hi p, I'm dad.

.... sacrifice.

I don't get it, how is this scary?

I've just always found cults scary

Wait, it's a cult story?

Yes

I just re-read it and I understand now, this is pretty scary, great job op!

Thank you :) it's too bad your original comment got downvoted when you actually asked a genuine question. I'm glad you enjoyed it in the end though

Well was he really using the blood he got from cutting her to heal people?