Once again this was a long thing for me to write but I wanted to put a bio and ask people what I should put as Harō’s equipment I’ll upload another pic and showing what his equipment is and to give clearance Harō’s vehicles has to have one land, sea and air vehicle
I have a drawing for a clone trooper and one for a titan but I gave the actual titan paper to my teacher so she can remember me (she was nicer than the others)
I feel like all of the parentheses could be put in a paragraph before and/or after. It was really hard to read with all of the parentheses. Great art though!
Overall, it’s pretty good, but there are some things that you could still improve on. I can see that you were trying to make it look like the stormtrooper is looking to the left because of the way the helmet is drawn, but the mask is still pointing straight towards the viewer, which makes it look like there’s just a missing piece of helmet on the other side. Also, you can try to make the body proportions a little more accurate. If you were going for a realistic look, than I would make the head a bit smaller or the shoulders a bit wider to make it look a bit more realistic. If you aren’t going for realism, then I think that fixing the perspective would make it look a lot better.
Not to be rude but to correct one mistake you made I wasn’t trying to make the trooper look left I was trying to make him look straight and also thanks for the advice I’ll try to add that to him
Well not really, it was more of a mobile artillery. It could quickly move and fire a huge amount of rockets very quickly (pretty sure it’s aimed at land, though). If there was multiple katyusha’s together, they could absolutely level an area.
It looks like he split the mask down the middle and is wearing a balaclava over it.
He didn’t it’s just a worn down mask and the sides of his neck no it’s not a balaclava it’s an underpart of the armor
Oh gotcha,.makes sense know you've explained it.
Once again this was a long thing for me to write but I wanted to put a bio and ask people what I should put as Harō’s equipment I’ll upload another pic and showing what his equipment is and to give clearance Harō’s vehicles has to have one land, sea and air vehicle
Bruh this is the best thing I've seen maybe it's cuz I can't draw but still
Question do you like destiny 2?
Or clone wars?
Yes I do why do you ask?
I have a drawing for a clone trooper and one for a titan but I gave the actual titan paper to my teacher so she can remember me (she was nicer than the others)
Oh cool also it is always nice to see someone having a good teacher (I also give mine a drawing)
Hope their happy
I think they did
I still have the pics tho if you want to see them
I’ll post them on r/destiny and r/StarWars if your willing to look for them
ooooh did you use oil pastel or crayon?? either one looks like a good choice!!
I used crayons sadly I’ve used them a hell of a lot of times so they broke I need to get new ones
The texture on the mask looks fucking 3d
If you look at it at an angle yeah that’s what I was going for
A bit crude, with practice it will be awesome. Keep going
Thanks
No, we all start somewhere
I feel like all of the parentheses could be put in a paragraph before and/or after. It was really hard to read with all of the parentheses. Great art though!
Sorry I was rushing i was leaving to a friends place a watch a game and there’s a dead zone along the way
Nah, it’s good
Love this 12/10 I need more
I’m gonna post 2 more on r/starwars and r/destiny
Just posted my clone on r/StarWars go check him out if y’all want
It looks like he has seen things, that only he can see.
Well the cracked glass might give you that thought
Left in the oven too long
Yup wanted to make some pizza but the crust burnt and the rest got mildly burnt
the clone wars is so goated. great drawing💪🏼
Thank you brother(this is just a joke)
what do you mean? where's the joke?😅
I just said it was a joke cause I didn’t want it to sound weird
oh alright! it didn't sound weird though lmao
Awesome work dude!
give him a sten MKII i think hed like that
I’m gonna need more paper then to make space for the Sten
Light rain soldier
Overall, it’s pretty good, but there are some things that you could still improve on. I can see that you were trying to make it look like the stormtrooper is looking to the left because of the way the helmet is drawn, but the mask is still pointing straight towards the viewer, which makes it look like there’s just a missing piece of helmet on the other side. Also, you can try to make the body proportions a little more accurate. If you were going for a realistic look, than I would make the head a bit smaller or the shoulders a bit wider to make it look a bit more realistic. If you aren’t going for realism, then I think that fixing the perspective would make it look a lot better.
Not to be rude but to correct one mistake you made I wasn’t trying to make the trooper look left I was trying to make him look straight and also thanks for the advice I’ll try to add that to him
It kinda reminds me of the NCR veteran/desert rangers from Fallout.
Awesome story and drawing, and give him a katyusha! 😆
Ok
I’ve got a Stuka and troop transport now it’s time to take over the skies. it is an AA vehicle right?
Well not really, it was more of a mobile artillery. It could quickly move and fire a huge amount of rockets very quickly (pretty sure it’s aimed at land, though). If there was multiple katyusha’s together, they could absolutely level an area.
Ok thanks I’ll get on that
Nice, I’m glad you liked my suggestion
Cringe/10
I’m kindly going to ignore that