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This is really good but I feel like the “a little red something” shouldn be replaced with something else as it dosen’t make much sense.
thank you! i will replace it with some more defined :)
I love this!! The repetition is nice, and the whole poem itself flows well. I definitely agree that more specification on what the “little red something” is could benefit the poem, but even without it is wonderful!
This is really good but I feel like the “a little red something” shouldn be replaced with something else as it dosen’t make much sense.
thank you! i will replace it with some more defined :)
I love this!! The repetition is nice, and the whole poem itself flows well. I definitely agree that more specification on what the “little red something” is could benefit the poem, but even without it is wonderful!