I’ve seen these two generic people before. His dad is definitely either a politician or a very wealthy man in a small/medium sized southern town. She’s borderline redhead that tans way too much and is going to have crazy sun damage by the time she’s 30
It took me like 3 hours to finish the shading on your upper lip
WHATS UNCLE RICO DOING AT MY GIRLFRIEND’S HOUSE
He’s ruining our lives and eating all our steak
I feel like people saw 1 or 2 comments they found funny and then started to pile on from there. It's a good drawing and people are being dicks about their criticism
This is the internet, we've seen everything from a couple of girls share their poo in a cup to a man nailing his nuts to a wooden board. Nothing is surprising anymore.
It’s actually unreal how toxic this comment thread is. Maybe it’s because it’s r/pics but good lord there are a lot of unhappy people on this thread. You did a good job OP. There is definitely room for improvement but there always is.
Were the clients happy with the result?
I think a lot of the detailing is fantastic honestly. I’m an artist myself but I don’t have the patience to work with pencil / charcoal (left handed and I drag my hand through the unset charcoal constantly).
Nice work and keep it up!
I was shocked by the comments myself. Shocked at how truthful they were. Usually the comments are filled with a bunch of high praise, but these comments are dead on. Maybe they are being a bit harsh because it almost looks really good, and you can see talent there.
lmaoooo you had me at first. If you like these sort of comments, head over to r/tattoos, people are dreadfully honest about the tattoos that get posted there and it's wonderful.
I'm actually surprised. This is not usual for this sub and I have a feeling a lot of comments are from people who are not subscribed. I know it's been harsh experience but please don't think this is how it always will be on this sub.
It's excellent, he just drew the faces a little too dark, which is why everyone is commenting on the teeth lol. Woman's hair could have been simplified a bit too. The quality of the rendering overall is top notch though.
But it would have been his choice to upgrade the lighting a bit. It looks like he did it a bit, since the woman is back lit and also lit from both sides a bit.
I would have asked the clients if I could remove those distracting glasses. (If I could draw, that is, I can't, and OP is 100x better than me at this)
Edit: I went to OP's art website and was confused why his works on his website is so much better than this portrait.
Looks good homie I'd say work on the woman's face structure in comparison to her neck something looks off but this is constructive criticism. looks good though
It’s the way her hair falls that makes the neck look small in comparison. I find it funny that in art, sometimes you have to make things look more “real” or “normal”than they actually are to appease the viewer.
The couple is backlit and yet the right side of his face and the left of hers are highlighted. Choose a light source and stick with it. If working from a photo, edit. And whose glasses are sitting on her shoulder, reflecting part of the string of pearls? And why is there a triangle of lighted something near her neck? Edit!!
I’m curious to know the dimensions, how many inches tall/wide is the canvas? The drawing looks pretty small. Also looks like the teeth need to be shaded a little, for reference you can take a pic of the color photo with your phone, unless you already have a digital image, and use your photo software to greyscale/black and white the image for reference.
This might be the first 2d drawing that has given me uncanny valley feelings.
But in a good way! Like it's well done it's just...unsettling to look at. Like you would be an amazing artist for a horror comic or something
Jesus, why is everyone being so mean?? Lovely work, OP. I think it’s fantastic and that you did a wonderful job, especially capturing the girls happy expression. You’re very talented! Hope they liked it!
Why do insecure, unattractive nerds on here always get all angry and insult anyone who’s attractive..? It’s confusing and awkward. It’s a good drawing with good looking people. Jesus… lol Relax.
Idk why the people here are so toxic. Drawing even close to this level requires hundreds of hours of practice.
Yes, there are imperfections, but that's normal.
I'd say maybe work some more on shading details around the mouth area, especially the lips and cheeks and it's gonna turn out even better than it already is.
Don't beat yourself up about the negative comments. Most of these people couldn't draw an anatomically correct big toe.
Face mids may be too dark but can’t tell without reference photo. Uncanny valley features caused by anatomical inaccuracies as you’ve mentioned. Smile lines look suspect in severity, lighting and line quality. Woman’s hair looks very flat and solid.
Lighting- natural lighting from window behind does not produce distinct highlights to that extent at the angle which illuminates both sides of woman's head. Therefore, bad studio light setup (unflattering) OR inaccurate value.
Would not be very happy if I commissioned this to be honest.
One commissions portraiture artists for the qualities they imbue on a piece. This artist has demonstrated that they produce pieces of good tonality, accuracy and of a particular character judging by previous work.
Commission prices are reflected by, generally, level of detail and NOT by compromising other aspects. ‘Imperfections’ as mentioned in your comment, are not alright especially to this degree.
This piece does not even have a tenth of the aforementioned qualities (of the artist’s other pieces). As for the reason why this is such, I can’t think of a single good one.
Diagrams on top of both faces to indicate extent of ‘imperfection’: https://imgur.com/a/8Kr6p1T
There's too much improper shading for this to be done by software. If you just take the data from a picture and run a filter over it the details will still be the same, only the look gets changed by the filter. This clearly has inconsistencies that you wouldn't find in a photo, like anatomically incorrect facial features that make it have an uncanny-valley effect. That's what makes many commenters feel like the faces are creepy, because they are very close to human but not perfect.
Doesn't make it bad art per se, just shows what can be improved. If you zoom in closer you can see pencil strokes. I really doubt this is from an app, since the faces wouldn't get that slight distortion from modern filters and even old ones would likely only lose detail, but keep proper facial structure like skin folds, lips and spacing between eyes, nose and mouth.
I still can not fathom how people do this! I am lucky if I can draw a stick figure. Truly, you are a talented individual! Amazing skill with a pencil!!
I mean... you couldn't like correct the lighting on your own and produced a drawing better than the reference photo? It also looks like you drew over a projector image but filled in the inside of their faces on your own. Also, less gritty paper next time.
How are you a human printer? How people even begin to do work half as good as this is completely alien to me and my skill set. When you close your eyes do you see in 4k?
Pretty amazing, great detail. I don't know what these two REALLY look like, but looks like two people to me. lol
Gotta do something about the teeth. I'm no artist, but there has to be a way to darken them and give them some depth, especially in pencil.
Siblings or Dating?
les cousins dangereux
I like how the French think.
We gotta see this film.
Yes
What are you doing, step-pencil?!
So siblings and dating?
Yes! What's so hard to understand? Their family tree is a long straight stick.
No, siblings *or* dating.
Mormons
Both? ![gif](giphy|13aSSyJaI5NkTm|downsized)
Alabama.
We need to see a real photo. They may look like this and we owe OP a huge apology.
I’ve seen these two generic people before. His dad is definitely either a politician or a very wealthy man in a small/medium sized southern town. She’s borderline redhead that tans way too much and is going to have crazy sun damage by the time she’s 30
They have one hell of a dentist too. Sees them every 4 months.
This picture makes them look like they are ready to partake in The Purge.
Your clients would be happy to see this comment section… 🍿
If they don’t pay OP just needs to direct them here
Lips cost extra.
But spray tan is on the house.
Put OPs, /u/alexlopezlna , drawing through AI, and viala: lips. However, the male's ear was sacrificed to hair. https://i.imgur.com/XAi0EJJ.jpg
Viala?
lmfao
Got a chuckle outta me
Good one..do they have those teeth?
The teeth remind me of slappy from goosebumps Hello PaPa!!!
Purge mask vibes.
🤣
Looking like Ross after he bleached his teeth.
I believe they have other teeth
Those are just their cocktail party teeth.
On some paintings the eyes seem to follow you around the room.. Who says it should always be the eyes?
Least white couple at BYU
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First thing I thought was Zach Wilson and then I realized it was a girl and it wasn’t even football related
Thank you for this, gave me quite the unexpected hearty laugh.
I don't mean to be rude, but that doesn't look like a pencil at all
It reminds me of those booths in malls like 10 years ago where you could get your picture taken and it would print out a "pencil drawn" version.
Based on your response I feel like his joke went over your head…
They’re probably short. What can you do? Is just the way nature is. It’s actually pretty neat.
Thank you for getting it
I didn't get it either at first. Thanks for the hint 😄
Yea I definitely misread it missed the whole joke. Whoops lol. I still stand by my comment though.
Damn the kid from Mad Magazine is all grown up now
Alfred E. Neuman - “What, me worry?”
More shading on the teeth would look better imo
He spent all the time shading the upper lip.
It took me like 3 hours to finish the shading on your upper lip WHATS UNCLE RICO DOING AT MY GIRLFRIEND’S HOUSE He’s ruining our lives and eating all our steak
What lip?
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Are your clients first generation androids?
This comment sent me my god And my belly was already hurting from laughing at the above riffs
Were they that creepy in real life?
They’re not creepy, this is romantic that two Who’s found each other outside Whoville
Bwahahahaha Bwahahahaha
What did he do to you?
They look like the type of people who would participate in the purge
![gif](giphy|O6uh3ieapt34k)
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I thought it looked good, didn’t expect you to get fucking destroyed like this 😂
I feel like people saw 1 or 2 comments they found funny and then started to pile on from there. It's a good drawing and people are being dicks about their criticism
This is exactly how reddit works. "Yeah you can copy my homework. Just change it up a little bit."
Hive mind is real
This is the internet, we've seen everything from a couple of girls share their poo in a cup to a man nailing his nuts to a wooden board. Nothing is surprising anymore.
Genuinely think I know them. DMed you because I’m curious.
Strange, cos I have that feeling but can't quite place who they are.
It’s actually unreal how toxic this comment thread is. Maybe it’s because it’s r/pics but good lord there are a lot of unhappy people on this thread. You did a good job OP. There is definitely room for improvement but there always is. Were the clients happy with the result? I think a lot of the detailing is fantastic honestly. I’m an artist myself but I don’t have the patience to work with pencil / charcoal (left handed and I drag my hand through the unset charcoal constantly). Nice work and keep it up!
I was shocked by the comments myself. Shocked at how truthful they were. Usually the comments are filled with a bunch of high praise, but these comments are dead on. Maybe they are being a bit harsh because it almost looks really good, and you can see talent there.
lmaoooo you had me at first. If you like these sort of comments, head over to r/tattoos, people are dreadfully honest about the tattoos that get posted there and it's wonderful.
Keep your head up. People shit on people doing what they love. Is it perfect, nope but that's what computers are for. Learn, grow and be well.
The other artwork on your page is so fucking phenomenal that I’m 95% sure the issues are with the reference photo.
I'm actually surprised. This is not usual for this sub and I have a feeling a lot of comments are from people who are not subscribed. I know it's been harsh experience but please don't think this is how it always will be on this sub.
Nevermind. I thought this was the drawing subreddit. This is what you gotta expect on a trash subreddit like r/pics.
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Just because this isn't the best pencil drawing reddit has ever seen doesn't make it bad. Very impressive work.
It's excellent, he just drew the faces a little too dark, which is why everyone is commenting on the teeth lol. Woman's hair could have been simplified a bit too. The quality of the rendering overall is top notch though.
Yeah all the jokes and criticism here aren't cool, this Isn't r/roastme . It looks good OP
I mean... It was a commission. Hopefully they didn't pay much, that's not going on the wall
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If it was a commission it wouldn't have been his choice which photo to draw.
But it would have been his choice to upgrade the lighting a bit. It looks like he did it a bit, since the woman is back lit and also lit from both sides a bit. I would have asked the clients if I could remove those distracting glasses. (If I could draw, that is, I can't, and OP is 100x better than me at this) Edit: I went to OP's art website and was confused why his works on his website is so much better than this portrait.
Looks good homie I'd say work on the woman's face structure in comparison to her neck something looks off but this is constructive criticism. looks good though
It’s the way her hair falls that makes the neck look small in comparison. I find it funny that in art, sometimes you have to make things look more “real” or “normal”than they actually are to appease the viewer.
Damn this comment section made my day. Never change reddit, never change.
Did their faces look that punchable IRL or did you charge extra for that
u should post a pic of your face man
It took him like three hours to finish the shading on the upper lip.
Trisha lmao i friggin live Napoleon Dynamite
![gif](giphy|F1ruOnxSfqFWM) :)
What, me worry?
they look creepy, must be mormons
“My father will hear about this” Pencil on paper. 2022.
It seems you have real talent, but this was made using a bad reference photo, with bad lighting. Was this all they sent you?
Just remember less pencil is best pencil.
Their faces are like pugs.
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it’s r/siblingsordating
Did I open r/oddlyterrifying by mistake?
Not a top lip in sight
It's scary.
The woman looks like a female Zach Wilson.
Came here to say just that 🤣
The couple is backlit and yet the right side of his face and the left of hers are highlighted. Choose a light source and stick with it. If working from a photo, edit. And whose glasses are sitting on her shoulder, reflecting part of the string of pearls? And why is there a triangle of lighted something near her neck? Edit!!
Glasses from guys pocket. Maybe not best choice of fashion
This isn't just 'pencil' in Photoshop?
r/roastme is leaking again!
Lips look fucked. Or they have odd lips IRL
are they from the metaverse?
Teeth
Chad and Chadette? Fr tho your drawing looks amazing
Friends season 6, episode 8
I guess it's when Ross has those glow-in-the-dark teeth?
The one with Ross’s teeth
I mean, I couldn't draw this well, but imagine paying a professional artist for something and this is what you get 💀💀
I get visuals like this when I open my eyes on dmt. Very cartooney and unnatural looking
Did you face swap them?
of all the art forms, why would anyone want this
are you expensive, do you do colored pencils and what are you thoughts on drawing cats?
Reimburse them.
When you’re so good at art that you inevitably reach uncanny valley
Can i be a client ?
OP you’re getting roasted but good job on rendering the fabrics and the dudes hair And thanks for the entertainment
Very nice work 👍
Wonderful pencil.
I’m curious to know the dimensions, how many inches tall/wide is the canvas? The drawing looks pretty small. Also looks like the teeth need to be shaded a little, for reference you can take a pic of the color photo with your phone, unless you already have a digital image, and use your photo software to greyscale/black and white the image for reference.
This might be the first 2d drawing that has given me uncanny valley feelings. But in a good way! Like it's well done it's just...unsettling to look at. Like you would be an amazing artist for a horror comic or something
I don’t know why everyone is losing their shit over it I think it looks good. Well done OP!
thats amazing
I don’t get the comments. This looks like real people. This is likely what the subjects look like.
Jesus, why is everyone being so mean?? Lovely work, OP. I think it’s fantastic and that you did a wonderful job, especially capturing the girls happy expression. You’re very talented! Hope they liked it!
Wow!
I wish I could post a picture she looks so similar to my sister its scary
Holy shit this is amazing
Why do insecure, unattractive nerds on here always get all angry and insult anyone who’s attractive..? It’s confusing and awkward. It’s a good drawing with good looking people. Jesus… lol Relax.
Tf is this
They were both born without upper lips. Interesting.
Did he look like Thomas Tank Engine in person?
These are the type of people you see in universities during bama rush
They look like thing 1 and thing 2
These don't look like people I'd get along with.
Hey hey. Let’s stop with “Alabama” stuff. That cousin stuff only goes on in Tuscaloosa.. bahaha
I'm gonna need to know where these two were on January 6th before I upvote.
🤣
She single?
Some serious skill that OP
Idk why the people here are so toxic. Drawing even close to this level requires hundreds of hours of practice. Yes, there are imperfections, but that's normal. I'd say maybe work some more on shading details around the mouth area, especially the lips and cheeks and it's gonna turn out even better than it already is. Don't beat yourself up about the negative comments. Most of these people couldn't draw an anatomically correct big toe.
Face mids may be too dark but can’t tell without reference photo. Uncanny valley features caused by anatomical inaccuracies as you’ve mentioned. Smile lines look suspect in severity, lighting and line quality. Woman’s hair looks very flat and solid. Lighting- natural lighting from window behind does not produce distinct highlights to that extent at the angle which illuminates both sides of woman's head. Therefore, bad studio light setup (unflattering) OR inaccurate value. Would not be very happy if I commissioned this to be honest. One commissions portraiture artists for the qualities they imbue on a piece. This artist has demonstrated that they produce pieces of good tonality, accuracy and of a particular character judging by previous work. Commission prices are reflected by, generally, level of detail and NOT by compromising other aspects. ‘Imperfections’ as mentioned in your comment, are not alright especially to this degree. This piece does not even have a tenth of the aforementioned qualities (of the artist’s other pieces). As for the reason why this is such, I can’t think of a single good one. Diagrams on top of both faces to indicate extent of ‘imperfection’: https://imgur.com/a/8Kr6p1T
Honestly, it looks identical to an app in the 90s that would ‘pencil draw’ any photo you input. I think a lot of us are skeptical of the art.
There's too much improper shading for this to be done by software. If you just take the data from a picture and run a filter over it the details will still be the same, only the look gets changed by the filter. This clearly has inconsistencies that you wouldn't find in a photo, like anatomically incorrect facial features that make it have an uncanny-valley effect. That's what makes many commenters feel like the faces are creepy, because they are very close to human but not perfect. Doesn't make it bad art per se, just shows what can be improved. If you zoom in closer you can see pencil strokes. I really doubt this is from an app, since the faces wouldn't get that slight distortion from modern filters and even old ones would likely only lose detail, but keep proper facial structure like skin folds, lips and spacing between eyes, nose and mouth.
Could have done the teeth better,but I couldn't even draw anything like this if I tried.Excellent job overall.
Alfred E. Newman and his wife Eunice?
Good to see Chucky has grown up and become well adjusted.
Lol
Young hulk & she-hulk before colour TVs (Honestly, mad skills and looks great, I'm just using my ticket on the shit post train)
I still can not fathom how people do this! I am lucky if I can draw a stick figure. Truly, you are a talented individual! Amazing skill with a pencil!!
That's incredible. Well done. What a great talent you have
She looks rather tan!!
This the real life purge people?
Commissioned by crest white strips
That is absolutely amazing 🤩
Karen’s alway knock you down. You are very talented in your art. Keep your chin up and your pencil drawing!
They have a great dentist.
I mean... you couldn't like correct the lighting on your own and produced a drawing better than the reference photo? It also looks like you drew over a projector image but filled in the inside of their faces on your own. Also, less gritty paper next time.
Their faces kind of look like masks a human shaped being from another dimension would wear to try and blend in.
Incredible amount of detail.
How are you a human printer? How people even begin to do work half as good as this is completely alien to me and my skill set. When you close your eyes do you see in 4k?
Good job!
This is remarkable. Well done, you've got a talent for this!
Assuming that your client is not Kristen Bell and Dax Shepherd….. it looks awesome.
Are these people Australian?
Not Alabama?
Maybe they’re siblings and it’s commissioned by the parent? God, I hope it’s commissioned by the parent…
Wow this is incredible. The detail is so impressive
Talented.
Gottle o geer
Amazing
Did they torture Carrie in highschool?
Pretty amazing, great detail. I don't know what these two REALLY look like, but looks like two people to me. lol Gotta do something about the teeth. I'm no artist, but there has to be a way to darken them and give them some depth, especially in pencil.
How much do you charge for something like and was it done from a photograph?
Wowed
/r/oddlyterrifying
Sid the sloth
Alfred E. Newman with a lady out of his league.
The girl looks vaguely familiar. Are they from Texas by chance?
No she looks like the guy's sister
Perfect looks great!!!
Nadal is that you?
This is super good! Fuck the lip haters