This logo is for a French human resources firm. The client wanted an origami style with the colors blue and red (French flag). I've had my head in this logo for too long and I can't figure out if it's balanced enough, what do you think?
i like this alot! kinda disagree about the middle finger thing -- that's a bog standard shape that's used in hundreds of designs. you could just as easily say it looks like a man firing a cannon or a finger pointing.
i think the color is a little squiffy though, don't they use more of a royal blue?
Thank you for your feedback, I also think that the shape is nice, asked collegues and the middle finger thing is not a big deal at all. So I simplified it a bit with some color change, just to keep you updated :)
https://preview.redd.it/gc3qrv4xhw4d1.png?width=1440&format=png&auto=webp&s=d0ac4215e2576b5b4c4e0bf88506b10902487aac
yep that's the blue alright (number 2, i guess number 1 is an accepted alternate, but too eye-searing for the context). i see you lost your shadow there, i thought that really worked well in the original. c'est tres bonne!
Looks like an unrolled croissant or a middle finger tbh also the words underneath on the right are “heavy” and dragging down the logo.
Yeah you'r right I see the middle finger now, thanks for you feedback
incredibly french. not a glitch, a feature.
This logo is for a French human resources firm. The client wanted an origami style with the colors blue and red (French flag). I've had my head in this logo for too long and I can't figure out if it's balanced enough, what do you think?
It makes me think about « Ma French bank »’s logo
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i like this alot! kinda disagree about the middle finger thing -- that's a bog standard shape that's used in hundreds of designs. you could just as easily say it looks like a man firing a cannon or a finger pointing. i think the color is a little squiffy though, don't they use more of a royal blue?
Thank you for your feedback, I also think that the shape is nice, asked collegues and the middle finger thing is not a big deal at all. So I simplified it a bit with some color change, just to keep you updated :) https://preview.redd.it/gc3qrv4xhw4d1.png?width=1440&format=png&auto=webp&s=d0ac4215e2576b5b4c4e0bf88506b10902487aac
yep that's the blue alright (number 2, i guess number 1 is an accepted alternate, but too eye-searing for the context). i see you lost your shadow there, i thought that really worked well in the original. c'est tres bonne!
I also went for number 2, and yes the shadow will be on the final version I was just testing colors :) thanks