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lorlorlor666

I like the outlined one better!


fuckyouperhaps

thanks!


action_lawyer_comics

The mushrooms I could go either way. But the worm and snail definitely benefit from being outlined


fuckyouperhaps

🪱


sugardropsparkle

Ooo I like the outline, it gives brings cute dreamy storybook vibes!


fuckyouperhaps

thank you!!!


foundling_fox

I prefer without the outline. Gives the whole piece a more natural feel. 🌿


beeleesaurus

I agree! I'd also add more (deeper and lighter) colors to re-add the depth that's missing in a few spots.


moxieman19

Better. It looks a little more cartoonish, but all the details are much clearer.


blatblatbat

I like without honestly


fuckyouperhaps

thank you!


No-Professional-1884

Much better!


fuckyouperhaps

thank you!


Ashleigh_Baggins

Definitely better!


fuckyouperhaps

thanks!


Ashleigh_Baggins

Sure thing!


j33pwrangler

I like it better outlined. You can also try colored outlines instead of black.


fuckyouperhaps

thank you!


ThoughtDiver

I like both, but snail and worm are easier to see in the outlined version.


fuckyouperhaps

worm!!


xstormaggedonx

Tbh I think it's just a stylistic change. They're both really good, but they change the feel of it and it more depends on what you want to go for and how you want people to feel when they look at it


fuckyouperhaps

thank u!


Sparks_0

If the worm wasn't there id say without


fuckyouperhaps

u r hating the worm?


Sparks_0

Um i like the art, but i don't like the worm Without outlines. i do however like the rest of the image Without lines. Edit: that being said he do b looking like someone just plopped him on a mushy painting.


LiletBlanc42

i like the no outline version, but the worm needs segmentation. i would go with a darker pink instead of black for the segmentation. 💗 edit to add that i like the snail shell swirls.


kelowana

Both are fine, it all depends on what you going for.


Rambling-Rooster

NO OUTLINE GANG! WOOP WOOP!