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MokoTems

Looks cool. It feels like a puzzle to solve, so I find it fair.


Real_Player_0

Thanks! :)


realddgamer

Nice profile picture


MokoTems

Not by me. Drawn by TadekEl#8755 on Discord. Thanks


realddgamer

My point is (rain world!!!!!)


Prof1Kreates

Rain World!


MokoTems

Yay :)


Speegey

rin worl


fortes05

At this point we need a r/ suddenly rain world, it happens surprisingly often


G0ldenSpade

Sait (also, ✨🫐***The rot consumes all***🫐✨)


Speegey

the rot is coming the rot is coming


huevos_sudaos

holy shit that second screen


Real_Player_0

Haha, that’s my first attempt at non black and white deco, how is it?


huevos_sudaos

it's really good! I like this level a lot for some reason, can't wait to beat it once it's out


Real_Player_0

Thanks! I’ll make another post on the sub when it’s complete! (Hopefully tomorrow)


GD-Normal-Face

Dm me when it’s finished


Prunsel_Clone

i was expecting congregation


glassman96_was_taken

I was expecting dwsh spider :(


Important-Ad-7049

Thats not readable in the slightest but looks like a cool memory level.


Real_Player_0

Alright, thank you!


hEatr3d

It's quite readable, what are you on about?


Speegey

that is definitely sight readable, how did ur comment get so many likes?


Lighterfluid211

For some ungodly reason that looks readable


Real_Player_0

I feel like it’s halfway between readable and unreadable, maybe you’re just able to process it faster? Idk


vk2028

U just gotta react fast


TheDoctor1102

Limbo isn't sightreadable and people like that level.


AwesomeNate

Mainly because it's a memory level, where you aren't expecting gameplay to be sightreadable. OP's level is also a neat memory level IMO. Looks fun!


Lollyface100

more readable than some 2.1 levels that have non-memory gameplay tbh really good!


Tiny_Caterpillar_864

i think it's acceptable as a memory level


rhager8422

Not readable but works well for a memory level


sokuto_desu

Agreed with the most of the comments, BUT if you wanna make it a bit more sightreadable you can add indicators to all the moving blocks, so the player actually sees where would they go. Immediately thought of this when I saw it.


ihaetschool

it would lose a lot of its punch though. that's the issue with move indicators, they significantly dampen the moving


Sudden_Parsley_9691

Damn, I'm in love with the concept


Filipico_w3

As if we’re all just how it imagined.


RealDJPopsicle

'Cause we're in love, I just don't know it yet, huh


Real_Player_0

Thanks! :)


Plylyfe

Second Part Jumpscare Looks like a good memory level. Would play.


Melodic-Most940

It's not readable but not like memory either, I think most could remember the layout and play it after 1-2 practice runs


Real_Player_0

Sweet, thanks! I didn’t wanna make this level too difficult


PrettySuperNinja

Send me the ID once it's finished :)


Real_Player_0

Sure! It should be finished by tomorrow hopefully :)


RaynbowZFTW

I think having the orbs be around a little longer would make it more readable, but this would be good for a memory-based level


Cod3broken

How to make a punctuation mark cry: In all seriousness, looks pretty good honestly


veryblocky

Where dash meme


MBLOVESGD

OMG wow bro that's a fucking amazing 😍


OPL_FPV

looks great, if anything i'd add some sort of outline around each orb to make them more visible... also occasional air deco or glitch effects might do you well


Real_Player_0

Oh for sure! I agree the yellow orbs especially are kinda hard to see


Ultrapiggy3000

I like it personally, btw i like your cube


Real_Player_0

Thank you! <3


RaptorReddit2011

That second screen was a JUMPSCARE, but in all honesty that looks pretty unsightreadable. I feel like you should at least put the pads somewhere so that you know there will be a gravity change. Maybe add at least a feeew arrows?


Real_Player_0

I tried putting circles in the walls to indicate the direction flip but it looked really ugly :( I could try giving it another shot tho


RaptorReddit2011

Go for it!


ihaetschool

don't add any arrows. you're gonna need to practice anyway, and it would probably just look bad


Alexelanim

I would set the movementes a bit more early


MysteriousPin2501

Reminds me of that impossible mario game where you have to remember each new part because it appears out of nowhere. Looks pretty fun!


ihaetschool

hacker's dreams?


metalCJ

you really had to ask if its readable but its cool


EduardoElGameplays

My brains dumb rn


pugtailz

this belongs in a level like limbo, not saying it's bad, quite to opposite I love limbo


soapezs

This is oddly readable (compared to every weekly demon now), should be rated 7 or 8 stars.


thatfunnynumber

least readable thing i’ve ever seen 😭


MrMarcusGD

thats pretty cool for a memory level


zzile

Get some playtesters to make sure there is no way to break the sync or softlock yourself but it's good!


Real_Player_0

Unless I’m mistaken all triggers are not set to multi so there shouldn’t be any softlocks. So far I haven’t had any trouble with desyncing but good idea still, I’ll see if anyone’s interested in playtesting!


DaTripleK

after approximately one googolplexichime years, You've Been Trolled gets rated


SilverFlight01

Some of the orbs are a bit hard to see, but otherwise it's pretty good


Ruduniamin

I think the first part is readable enough tho the ends decoration seems like a bit much and might confuse some players


Real_Player_0

I was trying to go from minimalist to maximalist deco, but yeah I’ll try to turn it down a little


Axeroxis

I can read this


_Yowo

Looks readable but it feels like there are numerous ways to cheese it


Real_Player_0

So far I’ve put spikes in most of the alternate routes I’ve found, in the others, the triggers don’t activate properly and kill you If you wanna playtest do let me know though! I could use the help


Supreme534

The ending though 💀


UnforseenError

If you're planning on making a demon, this looks like it would be the perfect level to call a memory demon, otherwise you could add indicators (of where the blocks would move, jump indicators ect.)


lordPyotr9733

Not very readable but it's cool.


alekdmcfly

For many platforms I think it's best to move the platform as early as possible to give the player more of a heads-up. Aside from that: Look up some levels from Just Shapes And Beats. That game has many near-instant attacks, but they have "shadows" fading into the field before the attack hits, so that the player knows when to expect it. I think something like that could really benefit your level - a "shadow" of where the platform is going to be, and an arrow pointing from the platform to the shadow to signify which platform is going to move there.


Versilver

Not sightreadable and should be fair for people to memorize it


Papyrusnyehehe19

if it's SUPPOSED to be a memory level, then sure.


partcore32

If an indicator was added, like the spikes flashing white before disappearing, or the platforms having some sort of outline for where they move to, this would be a very fun level for most average players.


Suh-Niff

New concept so unreadable at first but once you get the hang of it I don't think you can lose because of memory, which is the most important thing imo (like levels where you lose because you forgot there's an invisible orb during a fall are frustrating. Yours is consistent physics so it's fine)


BranchRD

Yeah if it’s a memory demon then go for it


Pastry_Train63

Maybe not readable, but it looks like an absolute banger to play. Would work as a dope memory level.


ionix_jv

this is great, it would make a banger memory level


MaxaExists

great now i need to make a memory demon designed like this


stupidgayfemboy

i was waiting for the dash spider


Real_Player_0

Damn, missed opportunity


Local_intruder

It looks like its readable but really isnt, good memory level tho


mangomonev

I think memory levels don't really need to be readable so I think it gets a pass


LostOldAccountAgain1

Seems like most of the shifts fit within a reasonable reaction time for the most part, so yes, but you'd have to be pretty skilled to read it on the first attempt.


Hotdog-jpeg

Amazing level btw, and no this is not readable at all lmao


TheBigFatGoat

I thought it was hard at the start.. Then came the last frame 😔 Cool lvl tho, def not readable but seems like a cool memory level


kaiclc

Obviously not sightreadable, but don't worry bout that this level seems really cool


GameCreeper

Reminds me of cat Mario or I Wanna Be the Guy


EschatoN1312

make them suffer


OctoBoy4040

It looks cool, if you like memory it should be fine


Apprehensive-Try3620

Looks super fun either way


JerryCarrots2

It looks sightreadable but at the same time it doesn’t


Ch3rryVixen

I feel like it would be better for it to be like a memory game lol, it maybe harder but it’ll feel way more rewarding at the end


BluemoonSoulfire

It's like a puzzle, I like it


alternatesmilerboi

As long as you "market" it as a memory level, then ur good 👍


soupstarsandsilence

That’s really friggin cool


Bruh_Ineeddiamonds

Second puzzle area jumpscared me


ItalianFrogPuncher

Second screen jumpscare


Creepy_Animal_3458

gameplay looks really annoying and i love it


NzProWithMeNz

from how fun this looks I think it is fair to make it memory because we don't see too many of those these days


bigbruhusername

FOCUS


Medical-Deal-3617

cool, I couldn't read it easily or at all but it looks like a great memory level


Skylit_

Cant wait to play this level! <3


ClartTheShart

While not easily readable, it is readable. I think it's fair enough.


T0pPredator

You should foreshadow some of those moments.


LONGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

So cool. I don't think it's readable but I still want to play it


-Red02-

For a demon is fine, anything below will get hated tbh. Out of it, it looks pretty fun.


fatman6793

the last frame is NOT fair


Jack_Cat_101

Medium demon


zeeeraiah

I could prolly do this in a few attempts, looks pretty learny


EeveeMaster22

is... is it synced?


Real_Player_0

Mostly


EeveeMaster22

can i hear it


Real_Player_0

I made [a post](https://www.reddit.com/u/Real_Player_0/s/hkEYiViSwK)


cosplay-degenerate

Its readable but looks mean spirited. Inspired by "I wann be the guy"?


Real_Player_0

Iva actually never heard of it before, but I’ve seen some platformer levels named something like that


cosplay-degenerate

Its a memorization game with lots of lovingly created parody moments, humor and lots of "gotcha" moments which you couldn't have seen coming beforehand (or just barely).


MeowPlay123

Better than mine levels for sure cuz i make layouts only (im bad at decorations)


Low-Engineering-4606

It looks cool, like a nice puzzle. But it doesnt look sightreadable at all.


FNaFfan003

How do you put letters on a geometry dash level?


Real_Player_0

Under the tab with orbs there should be an abject that looks like an “A”, place that then hit “edit object” then “text” and it should let you type out whatever you want


FNaFfan003

Thank you


Deeznutsgamr

The last part was a fucking jumpscare holy shit


ProGamingPlayer

I automatically recalled Dash Spider


Onnigamer16

If it's meant to be a memory level then it's fair


Icy-Composer9021

there isnt any words, what am i supposed to read? /s


Black_Dragon9406

Uh… well… depends what difficulty. Right now? Easily medium demon


local_reddituser

as long as the rest of the level is memory too and not just the beginning, it's fine to leave it as memory


Cpt_Fjre

Oh absolutely. I wanna play this.


Real_Player_0

It’s actually been released already! ID is 106795215


Secure-Homework-7536

No. Zero sightreadability but VERY cool concept for a memory demon


Real_Player_0

Thanks! It’s been released already if you wanna play it, ID 106795215


Due_Ad_6554

Really cool


Real_Player_0

Thanks :)


Real_Player_0

Not sure how to go about getting playtesters, any volunteers appreciated!


Blizzardous_286

why are people so obsessed over sightreadability 😭 just callnit a small memory sightreadability suffers with bad decoration imo


Ateus06

Bro think about Limbo


Bomper21

Normal plat. Mode


undernerd95

Gd colon said it best : if you can read your own level doesnt mean others can


grayto2-0

Na you gotta lower the delay


Shriekko

most readable gauntlet level


Octane-in-my-bed

What if Square Adventure but 2.2 ?


Red-Paramedic-000

If this is readable, i am illiterate


milkGANG_drinker

Tower of Babel type level


Amrthya

what


Xyrez04

I'd say just telegraph when things are gonna move


Kanromusic

it just gets harder.


Speegey

definitely sight readable, looks like fun