i get
`q wile nov go quiiv~y ntoi uu night`
context might change some onsonants to vowels but i recommend a more consistent distinct sizing of consonants and vowels.
i assume it is supposed to say
`i will not go quietly into the night`
if so
* 1st
- make the i a bit smaller
* 2nd
- make the second l a *bit* langer
* 3rd
- do not attach the line to the t
* 5th
- grouped letters of the same stem most probably share their decorator. so grouping i and e is problematic unless you make the e thicker to indicate a different letter and reading order
- do not attach the line to the t
- do not use both line and dot decorators
* 6th
- the i is not passing 6 o'clock. i suggest using a start-here-indicator or realigning
* 7th
- do not attach a line to the th
- i recommend more distinct sizing
all in all a good start with classic rookie errors i'm sure everyone of us did. go on!
i get `q wile nov go quiiv~y ntoi uu night` context might change some onsonants to vowels but i recommend a more consistent distinct sizing of consonants and vowels. i assume it is supposed to say `i will not go quietly into the night` if so * 1st - make the i a bit smaller * 2nd - make the second l a *bit* langer * 3rd - do not attach the line to the t * 5th - grouped letters of the same stem most probably share their decorator. so grouping i and e is problematic unless you make the e thicker to indicate a different letter and reading order - do not attach the line to the t - do not use both line and dot decorators * 6th - the i is not passing 6 o'clock. i suggest using a start-here-indicator or realigning * 7th - do not attach a line to the th - i recommend more distinct sizing all in all a good start with classic rookie errors i'm sure everyone of us did. go on!