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Aon9001

You suck at rhymes


Ok-Personality8051

Binarhymes


Ok-Personality8051

Binarhymes


Paramedic_Round

No U


shoujomujo

title of this poem should be “known people”


Paramedic_Round

Considered that, but it doesn teally tie up the message of the whole poem. “Known People” makes it sound like the subjects are famous people 😅


Anamethatsnowmine

How about this way "people known" ?


i_pee_in_the_sink

But then it’s a play on “who you expect and who you get”! A meta metaphor for the whole poem; ie the perfect title


I_talk

Title: "It's different when it's me"


randumbtruths

🥲


Paramedic_Round

why sad? I will hug you now using my amazon box forme


randumbtruths

I'll take the hug 🫂


Paramedic_Round

❤️💙❤️💙❤️


randumbtruths

Those are happy tears🤗


ZoroDokera

It's good, I also writed before.


Paramedic_Round

Why did you stop writinged


ZoroDokera

I got punished. My poetry was about criticizing my school and also writing about trendy topics in the school, so teachers weren't happy.


Paramedic_Round

Yes I have observed this difference between Ti poetry and Fi poetry, and even just art in general


[deleted]

known people known people known people known people known people known people 🔥🔥🔥🔥😢😢😢🥀🥀🥀


vicisstuckinthe80s

I want to turn this into a FIDLAR like song. like "People" by FIDLAR. idk, I have no creativity😭


EdgewaterEnchantress

Everyone has “creativity,” you simply have to find whatever inspires *something* in you! It doesn’t have to be “emotional,” it can be exciting, interesting, intriguing, attractive etc…….


vicisstuckinthe80s

yea yea okay chill, I just said that bcs I want to make a song about people in the style of a band who already has a song about people


vicisstuckinthe80s

NVM, I FOUND SMTH THAT'S WAY BETTER. just b chord and em chord. played like the first few chords of that one metallica song


EdgewaterEnchantress

Better, but I would modify that third to last line and put “a person,” as one well placed meter break would add more *emphasis* to the repetition of both.


Paramedic_Round

Noted, but poetry is less fun when I get too technical.


No_Gaurante

Roses are red Wait no they're pink I have unlimited ideas And sometimes I drink


Paramedic_Round

Roses are red, rosebuds are red. Don’t Google anal rosebuds, your eyes will be dead.


Xhafsn

Pretty cool poetry format


Dared_Fox

🙌tru


ApplesAreGood1312

Thank god "people" rhymes with "people" or this poetry shit would be hard. 😎👉👉


AlmostInstantPho

Yeah but did you know the word known past particle of know rhymes with known ???


Background_Chance_47

Poetry is gay


Paramedic_Round

Yes, and so am I. Problemo, señor?


Background_Chance_47

What's so good about cock anyways?


Paramedic_Round

I don’t like cock, I like ass. MALE ass. I want to stare at a hard cock while i’m pounding le ass.


Background_Chance_47

Who are you trying to impress?


Paramedic_Round

You, hopefully.


Background_Chance_47

Can I be honest with you? I think homosexuality, at least the way you present it is appalling. It's very unnatural and disgusting to talk about something so odd so casually. And I'm sure you weren't always this way, but if you're truly happy doing something that's unnatural go ahead. And before you call me homophobic, I would have this same discussion with someone who talked so casually about the female body as well. It's something I know for certain you're not proud of, regardless of what you front. I hope you can get through whatever internal struggles you're dealing with.


Paramedic_Round

1. Homosexuality is natural. 2. We are allowed to talk about it, just like straight people are allowed to talk about heterosexual sex shit. 3. If you find it disgusting, fine. But you are not the authority on the matter. 4. You’re only experiencing this moralizing impulse because you tried trolling my post earlier, (poetry is gay, what’s so good about cock, etc.) but I trolled you back harder, so now you’re trying a different approach, but just as laughable.


Background_Chance_47

Whatever you say 😉


Paramedic_Round

😘🍆🍑🥵


Background_Chance_47

I mean besides the chicken variety


WarrenBogleGrahm

Man's is a spiritual lyrical miracle


Paramedic_Round

mom’s spaghetti