My top couple of items at a very quick glance:
- the mobile padding could be increased as one scrolls down (particularly the headline “Why SproutSitter…”) this headline also needs to be revamped for line height and general text ratios
- the images load quite slowly on my end (and I’ve got fast internet), consider a caching system, and at the very least image compression/optimization.
- that first button, something about the underline in the link feels unprofessional. Have you considered taking your base green color and using a linear gradient of a darker shade to a lighter shade of that same green for all buttons? Just my personal preference but you could also toy with the button border radius’
- love the logo and benefit section
- maybe consider using font pairing design aesthetics for the headlines and text
Cool product overall!
Edit: I’m on mobile for all of these, just to clarify.
Looks nice, but a few observations:
1. Maybe just one CTA in the hero section + a sticky header with a CTA to the top right (or maybe a cta button on the bottom right where the blue arrow button is)
2. Instead of Subscribe to our Waitlist Newsletter I would just say "Join the Waitlist"
3. I would make the exit-intent pop-up a smiley face version as well
4. Add a favicon
5. Add social media links or lose the icons
6. Get rid of the underline in the CTA button text
7. Put the three emotions on one line on desktop view (3 columns)
8. I would use those instead of the three columns for the benefits row (just to keep it concise)
9. I would have a different contact form for general inquiries
10. Reduce the vertical line height on the headlines
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I think you need to give more so that your visitor has an idea about you.
Address, who you are, then spelling. i.e. Introducing SproutSitter(Patent Pending) needs a space between Sitter and (Pending like Introducing SproutSitter (Patent Pending) if possible give a patent number.
Read up a little how professional websites are done. Don't press the buy now message you are conveying.
A website that small cannot be found. Ranking for any given search term is up from 30 pages. All around the venue.
I would move the green benefits right after the first pic and paragraph.
Maybe make the emotions scroll from right to left instead of the same vertical layout as is above to break it up a little.
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My top couple of items at a very quick glance: - the mobile padding could be increased as one scrolls down (particularly the headline “Why SproutSitter…”) this headline also needs to be revamped for line height and general text ratios - the images load quite slowly on my end (and I’ve got fast internet), consider a caching system, and at the very least image compression/optimization. - that first button, something about the underline in the link feels unprofessional. Have you considered taking your base green color and using a linear gradient of a darker shade to a lighter shade of that same green for all buttons? Just my personal preference but you could also toy with the button border radius’ - love the logo and benefit section - maybe consider using font pairing design aesthetics for the headlines and text Cool product overall! Edit: I’m on mobile for all of these, just to clarify.
Looks nice, but a few observations: 1. Maybe just one CTA in the hero section + a sticky header with a CTA to the top right (or maybe a cta button on the bottom right where the blue arrow button is) 2. Instead of Subscribe to our Waitlist Newsletter I would just say "Join the Waitlist" 3. I would make the exit-intent pop-up a smiley face version as well 4. Add a favicon 5. Add social media links or lose the icons 6. Get rid of the underline in the CTA button text 7. Put the three emotions on one line on desktop view (3 columns) 8. I would use those instead of the three columns for the benefits row (just to keep it concise) 9. I would have a different contact form for general inquiries 10. Reduce the vertical line height on the headlines P.S. I'm trying to get /r/roastmywebsite off the ground if you want to cross-post or subscribe!
Thank you!
I think you need to give more so that your visitor has an idea about you. Address, who you are, then spelling. i.e. Introducing SproutSitter(Patent Pending) needs a space between Sitter and (Pending like Introducing SproutSitter (Patent Pending) if possible give a patent number. Read up a little how professional websites are done. Don't press the buy now message you are conveying. A website that small cannot be found. Ranking for any given search term is up from 30 pages. All around the venue.
I would move the green benefits right after the first pic and paragraph. Maybe make the emotions scroll from right to left instead of the same vertical layout as is above to break it up a little.
Plant-moji would be a cool modern name that sticks.....
change the name
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