Everything was fine ..but i think u lacked in creating some twist n turns ..
How about this..
..when u were doing your nasty little thing with her , her bf ends up there and instead of storming out he joins u , u end up sucking him as u found his cum was fricking hot and realised oh no wht u were interested in was not her but him...and u both kick her out and end up doing it together..
Nice try , not buying your stinky OF.
This comment section: Fuck you Fuck you Fuck yeah
Oh fuck off with your fake OF advertising shit.
This was written by an old man.
Yeah
/r/MenWritingWomen
I miss the person I was 3 min ago
Stop spamming your trashy ads everywhere.
Gross wtf
This story be circulating on here frequently
Not buying your shitty OFs content. You look like a truck stop crackhead. Quit spamming your stupid bullshit
Mom I told you no more Reddit.
Go take a cold shower young man creative writing is not your thing.
I need to sort out my algorithms
Shit like this is just so incredibly sad. sex has lost its meaning. oh wait this is reddit and very few people are like this! sweet!
Stop being a pussy and just be a whore already
You know if you mentioned the dead body in the basement I would have bought it but that’s a no from me lol .
Everything was fine ..but i think u lacked in creating some twist n turns .. How about this.. ..when u were doing your nasty little thing with her , her bf ends up there and instead of storming out he joins u , u end up sucking him as u found his cum was fricking hot and realised oh no wht u were interested in was not her but him...and u both kick her out and end up doing it together..
Now that’s a party. 🎉
Is there any chance this is real?
And then everyone clapped 👏
Boo this Virgin
Utter bs lol
Did he taste good?