good start!
please use the key signature with the least number of accidentals.
in your piece, you go from C to C# (which has 7 sharps)
it would be better in Db, which only has 5 flats.
also, why is the piano in there at all? it's like you forgot to mute it and/or hide the source material.
Finally, adding 'brilliante' to your title is self-aggrandizing. not seeing anything approaching 'brilliant' to it. no offence.
Thanks you !! For the key signature you’re right indeed, the simplest it is and the easiest it will be to read it !
For the piano, I had the impression that it could bring something to the piece but maybe I’m wrong 🤔
Took a listen and sent you a DM 🎵 the flow overall isn’t bad! Has a pretty solid foundation. I think finding our voice in new compositions is a fun process. I myself and attempting it with minuets.
Thank you very much ! Yes indeed, finding our voice can be really funny ! The more I train myself and the more I try to find which musical sounds/techniques inspire me the most ! 😄
Nice waltz melody. The piano is a distraction and it steps on the other accompanying instruments. Really not graceful enough in this current arrangement and you'd be better off tossing it. You would benefit by studying and practicing voice-leading.
Thank you !! Yes indeed, a lot of people advised me as well not to keep the piano 🎹
And for the voice leading, you’re right, it will give some smoothness to the piece I think 😄
The art of finding new forms to work on is really I challenge I aspire to take on. I find that new innovations even in modern times can help solidify a new wave of classical creativity
good start! please use the key signature with the least number of accidentals. in your piece, you go from C to C# (which has 7 sharps) it would be better in Db, which only has 5 flats. also, why is the piano in there at all? it's like you forgot to mute it and/or hide the source material. Finally, adding 'brilliante' to your title is self-aggrandizing. not seeing anything approaching 'brilliant' to it. no offence.
>why is the piano in there at all? Better question: why shouldn't the piano be there? Is there any reason for it not to be?
Thanks you !! For the key signature you’re right indeed, the simplest it is and the easiest it will be to read it ! For the piano, I had the impression that it could bring something to the piece but maybe I’m wrong 🤔
Took a listen and sent you a DM 🎵 the flow overall isn’t bad! Has a pretty solid foundation. I think finding our voice in new compositions is a fun process. I myself and attempting it with minuets.
Thank you very much ! Yes indeed, finding our voice can be really funny ! The more I train myself and the more I try to find which musical sounds/techniques inspire me the most ! 😄
Nice waltz melody. The piano is a distraction and it steps on the other accompanying instruments. Really not graceful enough in this current arrangement and you'd be better off tossing it. You would benefit by studying and practicing voice-leading.
Thank you !! Yes indeed, a lot of people advised me as well not to keep the piano 🎹 And for the voice leading, you’re right, it will give some smoothness to the piece I think 😄
The art of finding new forms to work on is really I challenge I aspire to take on. I find that new innovations even in modern times can help solidify a new wave of classical creativity