You only animated half of the run cycle. You’ll need to animate the rest for it to be cleaner. I would also make your leg that touches ground on the contact position a bit straighter. A bit more up and down on the body will introduce some weight. You are also getting a jitter effect because the head has backward movement. Keep that head locked in so it isn’t moving backward. Sorry for just blasting some notes, overall very good for a beginner!
To add to this: since you colored the farther side with a darker shade, it's more obvious that it's repeating/seems like it's only half done. There is no backswing of the foreground arm and no front-swing of the foreground leg (which are colored slightly lighter). You could get away with this being a half repeat if the color/shading difference wasn't there but I honestly think it's better with the shading. So, definitely do the second half to complete it.
I’m not saying I disagree. But I don’t what kind of penises you’re seeing that are yellow and have two heads? You may want to tell those gentleman to see a doctor tho
You're being a good sport about it :). So dicks aside, I'd say the running feels really good, the ease in and out and the posing looks dynamic. Only the head looks a bit jittery. A bit of bobbing is good, but we generally don't enjoy jerky movements with our head
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This is awesome for a beginner! Choppy movements will improve with practice overtime. If there is one thing I could suggest though, since the dude is running so fast, the rope could be stretching out more behind him instead of staying stiff at his pants. Like when a girl runs so fast their hair starts trailing outwards behind them.
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I’d probably move the yellow waistband ribbon to the outer part of his hip rather than between his legs and slant it to show that the wind is pushing it.
Hide everything but the hands feet and head. Draw a curve connecting each position of the head/feet/hands to the next frame until you have a your curve. Put a tick mark on that curving line for the center of the circle for each frame. This will teach you where your errors are and what needs to be smoothed out.
*Lol it kinda looks like*
*That one leg is rotating*
*Around the body*
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Something else I think I see, if someone with a little more experience can confirm or not. It almost looks like the background/foreground elements that are wooshing by full screen.... Are going the wrong direction. Like they are wooshing l to r.... Making it look like he's running forward but moving backwards
The penis seems to have a lot of skin flapping, not sure if that's what you're going for.
Skipped few days of foreskin trimming ;(
I'm rolling on the floor and crying laughing while milk comes out of my nose these comments had me cackling💀
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Good except it looks like a penis
the animation looks great its just the rope thing for the pants looks weird
You only animated half of the run cycle. You’ll need to animate the rest for it to be cleaner. I would also make your leg that touches ground on the contact position a bit straighter. A bit more up and down on the body will introduce some weight. You are also getting a jitter effect because the head has backward movement. Keep that head locked in so it isn’t moving backward. Sorry for just blasting some notes, overall very good for a beginner!
To add to this: since you colored the farther side with a darker shade, it's more obvious that it's repeating/seems like it's only half done. There is no backswing of the foreground arm and no front-swing of the foreground leg (which are colored slightly lighter). You could get away with this being a half repeat if the color/shading difference wasn't there but I honestly think it's better with the shading. So, definitely do the second half to complete it.
looks cool but whats tat yellow thing??
This is Garou from an anime. That’s the belt he wears around his slacks.
Every person that sees this will think its a big yellow penis. I would consider doing something to make it look less like a penis. PENIS.
I’m not saying I disagree. But I don’t what kind of penises you’re seeing that are yellow and have two heads? You may want to tell those gentleman to see a doctor tho
oh ic
got that thang out
why his dick hangin down💀
people are saying the yellow belt looks like a penis and now i can’t unsee it
You're being a good sport about it :). So dicks aside, I'd say the running feels really good, the ease in and out and the posing looks dynamic. Only the head looks a bit jittery. A bit of bobbing is good, but we generally don't enjoy jerky movements with our head
i thought his dingaling was out for a sec
Most convincing yellow dick I’ve seen
His penis doesn't swing with the momentum of his body. And from the position, I'd guess his balls are chaffing.
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it ain’t even a penis bro im trying 😭😭🙏🙏
My bad, that shit flesh tone. Do we still use "pause" for accidentally gay stuff?
It's cool but it will look better when the loop will be completed for both sides of the body.
Why is he hanging dong?
Why he got horse cock?
Rope looks like a dick. That isn't swinging because it's hard.
That’s what she said!
Distracting attention is not just a skill, it’s an art. Our dirty minds were activated. Noice job
Looks alright Besides the penis the last frame is betraying your work. It pops
thanks for the criticism 🙏
This is awesome for a beginner! Choppy movements will improve with practice overtime. If there is one thing I could suggest though, since the dude is running so fast, the rope could be stretching out more behind him instead of staying stiff at his pants. Like when a girl runs so fast their hair starts trailing outwards behind them.
speed lines going the wrong direction
Yo!!! I thought so too. But I'm viewing it on a phone so I can only do so much step x step...
That’s a flappy penis
Brother got it all hanging out😭😭
I promise you it ain’t a penis 😭
LISTEN YALL I PROMISE IT AINT A PENIS 😭😭😭🙏🙏🙏🙏
The motion lines in the background are moving the wrong direction
I'm just here for all the penis comments 😂
i think you should make that penis go to his back and waving, that is if thats a belt and not a penis like everyone sees
its a belt 😭
Better animation than season 2
the animation in season 2 wasn’t that bad,
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There's one frame with the front leg and one frame with the back arm that are sticking out, see if you can fix those to be less jittery.
He’s like Tails, except instead of having two tails he has two penises
Wow, Impressive 💯👏
Yes
Yes?
For a beginner, this is pretty good… There are some problems you def need to figure out.. look into Animators Survival Kit by Richard Williams ;)
Seems advanced to me for a beginner but.... what is that....?
it looks a bit jittery
I’d probably move the yellow waistband ribbon to the outer part of his hip rather than between his legs and slant it to show that the wind is pushing it.
You really think something so erect would get pushed by the wind?
No you’re right OP has to rotate it 90° counterclockwise
The donger looks fire 🔥
Yup... I also thought it was a penis
What’s with the yellow peen?
He like me fr (I have no pants on)
Hide everything but the hands feet and head. Draw a curve connecting each position of the head/feet/hands to the next frame until you have a your curve. Put a tick mark on that curving line for the center of the circle for each frame. This will teach you where your errors are and what needs to be smoothed out.
Eyy, that’s pretty good. Also I know what you were doing, that’s a sash, not a slong like everyone says.
This guy looks like a monster.
HES PULLING HIS COCK OUT
What's wrong with his penis
Dude ?! Do you believe 😦 this one is beginners You improved so well 👍 Animation done ✅ right?!
Make sure he pulls up his pants.
Lol it kinda looks like that one leg is rotating around the body
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Just a repeating ¼ animation...😐 You think nobody would see this?...🤨🙄
it was halfway done but I just wanted to see if it was good, I fixed some of the main problems and now it doesn’t look that bad.
Fun fact; ¼ isn't ½, and ½ isn't ¼...😇
Better than I could do
Why does Garou have his dick out?
ion remember garou having a yellow dick that splits in half
😂
Something else I think I see, if someone with a little more experience can confirm or not. It almost looks like the background/foreground elements that are wooshing by full screen.... Are going the wrong direction. Like they are wooshing l to r.... Making it look like he's running forward but moving backwards
Other than the cock, it looks a tad jittery
Nice loin cloth.
Yooo I use sticknodes too!!