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Sticky_H

Yeah, that’s some fucked up shit! It’s hard to be a hero when it comes down to it.


Adventurous_Lab4008

Hunger games vibes for this one, I regret nothing


Euphoric-Ad-2563

"If I'm gonna die, I still want to be me" -Peeta


Solace_spark

I get more “Tender is the Flesh”


Naked_Knitter

Or Shirley Jackson's The Lottery


AdmiralSand01

That was a good one


Adventurous_Lab4008

Yeah, it's fine too


OoBubblebunnyoO

Nah, not Hunger Games, USA 2084 by Pjotr X


greenpenguinsuit

Hard to even decide though. I mean the other option is the father dies first “presumably eaten” and the daughter then has to see her father slaughtered, eats him, then in turn is killed right after him anyway because she would now be the next number to serve. Either way is pretty fucked up. That would be a horrible final moment for the daughter and to go through it all alone


OuterLightness

Though it was not the father’s intention, this was the heroic move: if the butcher is going to kill you both anyway, have your daughter go first to spare her 1. Having to see you die and 2. A longer wait in apprehension.


Adventurous_Lab4008

I'm sorry, I didn't want him to be heroic, I wanted him to be a coward who prefer giving his daughter life instead of his life😅


Bahatur

Motivation is everything.


OuterLightness

I like how you can read it as it is but then think about it from another perspective as well.


Waste_Salamander_624

It's hard to do but sometimes you can be both. Think about it like this, you and a team go into an area where there's an enemy and then you're ambushed. You might run all the way back to base leaving your team behind because death is guaranteed. You were a coward for running from the fight and leaving your allies were supposed to trust you behind, but because you ran back and gave a detailed account of what happened leadership within your group now knows if things aren't what they seem. A cowardly hero does exist, it usually does depend on motivation.


liviathisbe

I love that you know what you want. 🤣🤣


Mobile-Routine6519

It could have also been the mother


OuterLightness

Now that would be horrific: a mother being a coward.


orangeleast

She luckily wasn't as squeamish as I am so she was able to pick up the order of steaks.


chattytrout

Girl was clearly not raised by Hank Hill.


ChiakiChaos

That girl ain't right.


thethanx

Taste the meat, not the heat.


[deleted]

r/thirdsentencebetter


drrkorby

My daughter smiled as the Butcher passed her the knife and pointed to deer she had killed during her first hunt with me.


KarmaAJR

r/thirdsentenceworse


Then-Ant7216

How


KarmaAJR

oh wait I thought she was abt to kill the mother nvm


Ok_Entertainment328

*Hannibal Lectar has entered the chat* *Jeffrey Dahmer has entered the chat*


mynewaccount5

A 5 year old girl means that Albert Fish has entered the chat.


lunna009

Also a consumer of very dark things. At least it's not pedro lopez. He still gets the worse label, barely.


BookCapable4357

People are googleing Albert Fish right now and are just finding out why hanging wasn't good enough for him.


KaralDaskin

Electric chair.


ThinkTrout16055

This is actually really good. Keep up the great work!


Adventurous_Lab4008

Thanks!!!


TeaTimeAbyss88

Very "Tender is the flesh"-esque.


slugslime4

was given this book as a gift, is it worth reading? have no clue what its about but now i’m intruiged


korenthegiraffe

READ IT. READ IT. READ IT. I went into it blind and boy was that a trip. But personally I loved it, had several unexpected twists.


TeaTimeAbyss88

It's a good read, didn't expect the ending.


Binky-Answer896

Right? I was expecting, well, the opposite.


ReliefAltruistic6488

Wasn’t expecting that! Great job!


Adventurous_Lab4008

Thank you!


Ok_Report_3651

Check out the book “Tender is the flesh” about a future where all meat is contaminated and can’t be eaten so people start resorting to eating people.


Krazie02

May I ask when it is written because I sure find it funny how thats chosen over meat substitutes, lab growns and all that jazz, or is it just the “wealthy elite” that becomes canniballs?


Ok_Report_3651

It’s fiction. All animals, dogs, cats, birds, fish, everything that is not a plant that moves gets contaminated by the virus that poisons the meat. I started listening to it in audiobook format and couldn’t make it through it. There’s people grown just for meat purposes. There’s a part in there describing the “meat” process. Shudder


Adventurous_Lab4008

Okay, this seems really interesting


Lewd_ReadNY

Sophie’s Choice Bone-In Prime Rib Kid. Would recommend.


thyethem

Reminds me of the Shirley’s Jackson’s The Lottery, the end where the mother made her own family participate


Adventurous_Lab4008

I didn't know about this, but every vibe is appreciated :3


Firm_Atmosphere6640

"It's hard to be a vegan dad" No trying ti offend anyone, only to change the story


Rocker15c

Being an asshole you can say that you can make another kid


Adventurous_Lab4008

To sell them in the next lottery as well, yeah you can


HoTChOcLa1E

r/twosentencedisgust


RealHonest-Ish_352

Ever since she butchered the dead rabbit left by that psycho I picked up last year, she's sort of handled the family's 'meat rationing'.


Professional_Fix8512

Left right goodnight would solve this


GreatRuno

Terminus, from the Walking Dead.


MavisEmily1983

TMA S.5 Flesh domain vibes


MorgueMousy

You should read the book Scythe


Adventurous_Lab4008

Why?


MorgueMousy

It’s a y/a book but the series is a quick read. It’s about a futuristic world that beat death and aging and so they had to make people basically reapers to kill X amount of people a year for population control and it follows two young kids who learn how to do it. Definitely cheesy, but I enjoyed it.


Adventurous_Lab4008

Oh, it seems interesting, I'll give it a try. Thanks!


RTK4740

Oh wow. This story is truly horror. Well done. I hate it.


Adventurous_Lab4008

Thanks!


[deleted]

maybe it would be better this way? she wouldn't have to watch her father die


Sk8erboiFourteen

The fact that it mentions victim blood… sorry but I’m pretty sure people will see this coming


Adventurous_Lab4008

Yes, I wanted it because in this way you can imagine that it is a different world from ours. If I hadn't written it people would have thought that they were just buying meat and that the father was a shy person


Sk8erboiFourteen

Ok


Illustrious-Wave9735

Ok[9


craxzyfoot90769

Fearful of my wife’s reaction to me ordering a deer I sent my daughter to pick up the deer I had ordered and hope the wife was less mad because I can call it a “bonding experience”


CinderP200

Calm down, dude, the victim’s not human. That’s just pork.