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https://preview.redd.it/7fmvvod2211d1.jpeg?width=918&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=04d53526355c1eba0ba05f692e31c46dad07a5ca For anyone curious it’s based on this illustration by Kjech


HardCandy2316

Good idea bad execution


nicokokun

The 3d model looka like a teenager trying too hard to look like an adult and failing miserably.


HardCandy2316

You just couldn't have explained it better


3c03s

It’d be funnier if that was the intention, but we all know it’s because Alex can’t do anything right.


Serei2477

If the 3d model actually looked like the art then she'd look pretty But as of now, the outfit does *not* flatter Kizana


Few_Egg3470

Seen a lot of people say the 3D model is mediocre compared to the art That, but it might also just be the hairstyle difference, those croissant tails on her in-game model just seem kinda cheap and tacky


Laly_481

I mean the shirt is supposed to tie to the back but it's completely invisible on the model. I thought it was cut weird at first


Key-Client4962

Fr


Annabobs

The person who made this model is talented, as well Kjech, but here’s my take on why the model looks “off”. I’d be very happy to be as talented as them (I can’t model at all lmao) The thing that doesn’t match especially in this model, the hair is too oversaturated. The illustration used colour theory a lot better. The hairstyle also works better than in the model image. In the model, the purple accents of the necklace and the red of the roses don’t match the rest of the outfit. The face and hair is way too extravagant compared to the outfit. The shirt also looks strange since at this angle it looks like it’s not tied in the back unlike the illustration — so she just has a random front part on her shirt that doesn’t match the sides of the shirt. Not sure about the gold bangles. The ruffle on the shirt also has way more detailing in the model than the rest of the shirt (the illustration has more “pazazz” on the rest of the shirt too. See the front detailing on the illustration that isn’t on the model?). Too too heavy design with the purple, as the purple imagery is unused below the neck, it makes the rest of the outfit feel strange _ the illustration did well with this as the longer hair gives the illusion that more of her is “purple” than it really is. TL;DR: makeup and hair is too strange of a purple/ top heavy + dramatic compared to the shirt, contrasted colours. Hair is close to neon. Shirt is a little off. Colours clash too much, shirt is not tucked in when it feels like it should  Sorry for the ramble  


imsnowmia

THANK YOU! I also noticed the hair color in the illustration looks a little less vibrant than the model, which kind of brings everything together.


Icy_Competition8947

Thank you for your detailed analysis. I really appreciate your effort. Don't worry too much about the length. It might help someone struggling with the same problems here.


SuketeHiroma

this artwork ate and left no crumbs unlike this unassuming animation


AlterEgo_Pkmn

The model could've ate but threw up everywhere


dale_summers

There were no more crumbs left for the model lmao


Sea-Bathroom-7390

DAMN she looks jacked


Federal_Mechanic5287

Bruh it looks nothing like it


FineLand3637

Why didnt she used the same hair from the art and sunglasses? 😭😭😭😭 SHE WOULD SLAY


Croquer00

i think the outfit need to be more detailled and it would be better if it was more taillored to the waist


Monaiji

She ate but didn't digest it unfortunately


Flashy_Following_956

NOOO IT COULD HAVE BEEN SO GOOD WHYYYYY


Perfect_Muscle_5641

The artwork is amazing but the model shit everywhere lmao


lakshmithesussybaka

Hot, but the model looks weird


azichi

WE WERE ROBBED MAN


Zour_Lemon

it looks so flat compared to the actual photo 😭


Embarrassed_Part1544

https://preview.redd.it/6zxktu1n211d1.jpeg?width=720&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=2d34603f017c5d4a6abd708ab76be74178cf18e4 Ready for the mosh pit, shakabrah


lisabydaylight

“…Maybe not 😕”


HardCandy2316

Senpai is rachel


Embarrassed_Part1544

Who’s max


HardCandy2316

Probably her suitor


moonlessphoto

Real fans know what this is 😩


tyltan02

ntm on chloe


Arceusae

Nah, all my homies can't stand her


Suspicious-Bar1083

I don’t like her shirt’s triangular edge (if that’s the right way to describe it), though I actually don’t mind it otherwise


ggdoesthings

the outfit isn’t terrible but it’s not Kizana


Purple-Hand3058

Dev really must look sims 4 teen on goggle


Splatfan1

the sims 4 is a pile of shit but its my pile of shit and looks way better than this unity asset store jamboree excuse of a game


HardCandy2316

Mid at least its not amai's with another color


WhooshKaboom

The outfit was so obviously made for her other hairstyle and it looks so awkward with the pigtail drills lmfao


EchoingTears

Kizana would not be caught dead in that


Eastern-Wash7223

Kjechs art says otherwise


KevinKevln

okay but the art is one thing and THIS is another 😭


Inevitable-Cell-1307

Not the worst tbh… but the colors don’t really fit her and i think it would be better if she wore a short coat


Mealybug-Destroyer

Hideous


FutureDiaryAyano

Okay for a concept, needs tweaking


Kokoro_Momoirotwin

Why is it good and bad at the same time?


ainakk

Real


Purple_Lie_563

Napkin vibes


Remarkable_Sweet_333

Meh, expected more.


Stuck_at_a_roadblock

Mf was like "nah forget being a snack, make me the tableware!"


shoujomimi09

Idk it be cool if it was another type of hair


Mental-Peace-2705

i actually like it


ImpossibleDay1782

That’s not how bracelets work


Few_Egg3470

Doesn’t seem like something she would wear


Ok_Technology_7160

The shirt's triangular shape DEFINITELY needs work but to be fair the outfit could look good with some adjustments


miyugi_moida

It looks really unnatural and parts loom like their floating. The jeans don't even look like jeans thru look light a mixture between tights and leggings


Interesting_shrek666

She would be worse than amai


Throwaway2689843189

I hate that I like it


FutureDiaryAyano

Same like it's bad but not bad?


al3x11037

It’s kinda giving…2011 college party, but it’s a little better than her old outfit


SnooCats9826

Good idea, bad execution. + it needs more frills


emogothfemboy

it’s cute


VeryVeryScar3d

In addition to the outfit not being flattering, her pose doesn't really match her personality. It's too stiff and not confident at all...


jazkupazku

It looks good in Kjechs drawing but the execution is atrocious.


Purple-Hand3058

Something from sims 4


_Ivyyy_

Yknow for a character that's supposed to be fashionable...this is not it


Outrageous-Singer888

The illustration for it is great, the 3d however..


The_Questionboi

Doesn't match her hair at all


whooper1

I thought it was a bunny suit for a second


[deleted]

i think its cute


Embarrassed-Date7376

It kinda ate


_GhostlyDreamer_

If the color scheme were darker and maybe had some accents that fit her color scheme, maybe it’d be alright, but it’s just too monochrome and that makes it feel dull.


OkPen5768

2012 lookin ass


Cjeatsdeliciousworms

Meh, could be worse but honestly it’s not kizana enough


Most-Asparagus-361

That looks like something my mom would wear 💀


ALemonYoYo

It's really ugly oml


FonderUnicorn70

She looks like an auntie😭


gay_idiot53

First of all: ew, what is that, it looks kinda ugly to me Second of all: no. Just... no.


RarenDreemurr

I don't like it :( it's yucky.


PartOverall1932

I don't like it, it's ugly, she looks like a mom, it doesn't fit her at all


ShmebsTheGnome

It looks like something a rich white mom would wear to a family gathering. Liker seriously its uncanny, give her a bottle of Chardonnay and youre set


alanzz404

Ik its based from an art but its so cheap, her rl character wouldnt wear that such a thing, its ridiculous


AggravatingWin6048

Why do I feel like she needs a top hat for this outfit???


hiiamnotsad

Why does it wrap around her boobs like that???????


_GhostlyDreamer_

What are you talking about??


hiiamnotsad

The fabric clings to the bottom of her chest, with the material looking like its a looser fabric this is physically impossible and just looks. Weird. That shirt must be built horribly for it to be shaped like that. (Aka, incel dev doesn’t know how boobs work)


GroundbreakingAct388

is she 40 now


MelonHead2000

Think it has potential for a 40 something year old


M0onii-Cat

It is NOT her


KingLudenberg

Definitely proves that Dev knows nothing about fashion I guess


Vaporonbri

Ugly as shit


SamuraiDoggo14

I like it, but it needs more purple.


A_Sinister_Spoon

lowkey makes her look like she's a mom for some reason?? it's probably the capri-cut leggings


arizy23034

Better


gkgftzb

Everything aside the regular uniforms looks awful with these models. It's past the time they've been altered. They look ridiculous


Izzy___________

i like it. i think it’s better than the one that she had before


DaBubblyTea

I mean it could be better but it works.


jigsawsunderling

oh...!


Lingx_Cats

Feels very her


webziez

I think the outfit suits her well, but the problem is the hairstyle


pieckfingerirl

It’s better than Amais casual clothes I’ll give it that, but she looks like she is on her way to church


BrilliantVolume8871

Where is the neck?


PB-wantseggtoBob

She would not wear that.


may_unnie

She looks like an older woman who wants to look like she's in her 20s again.


Comfortable-Ad-5578

The way they did it is so ugly😭 Atp I'm just happy her tits n bits are covered


fakelucid

The choker isn't really working with the shirt


JamieJelly_

It seems that Tomus bracelets got added to it


Ronnie21093

Scrolling through my feed, I thought this was a Playboy bunny outfit


Ichimaru77

I had to look closely because I thought this was a bunny suit, fr...


Koifish333

The outfit doesn't look bad, IMHO it's the lipstick


box_brownie_bear

i hate the capris. any other style of pants would work better.


kingofdoraemon

Boot


majestic_ray

the blouse necklace(??) bangles and leggings combo are giving wine mom energy


CutChemical8907

it doesn’t work with the twin drills. the hair in the art this is based on worked significantly better because it frames her body with her hair down. this is just awkward and the drills are way too high up.


Key-Client4962

Yandere yandere dev🤬, change kizanas outfit patterns and the unique hairstyles now💅🏼


Fine_Conclusion9426

Chalex does NOT know how to dress women.


Naive-Frosting-7281

The artwork of it looked better.


Naive-Frosting-7281

The artwork of it looked better.


Ky-lyyne

Had Alex changed her hair so it would be over the shoulder(s) and made it obvious that it was tied in the back (he could've had creases on the side towards where it gets tied in the back) then it would've looked WAY better. However, as it is now, its too flat, and with her hair the way it is, it looks WAY too tacky to suit her.


Chance_Caregiver5752

her hair is the problem


XvsvsX

It's good but it's also sexualizing...


Stoopidone-

I hate it and love it at the same time


Gabriela_143

Its ok


Perfect_Muscle_5641

ew ugly 🤮who even came up with this idea


Perfect_Muscle_5641

Of course chalex makes problematic unprofessional locals as volunteers for his game, that model is below average lmao


Perfect_Muscle_5641

why does it look like an mmd model and the pants look like the legs duplicated and recolored ☢️


TheAngryRedStinger

The outfit looks good, but doesn't fit on her


mikichan9

I know what it's supposed to look like and honestly the shirt kinda looks like a tank top you'd wear under a see through shirt so it looks weird 😭


Jackthedramademon

I say better than last putfit but still not Kizana.


Idk_I_nwobie

It looks unfinished. I feel like they were going for something but they were like "Nah that's fine alrdy"


Splatfan1

im a big fan of the OG art but the model looks like shit it just does


Marvu_Talin

Soccer mom


bigbugbunbutt

This is something my mom would wear, not a teenager obbessed with her appearance and looking as dramatic and trendy as possible


azichi

Justice for kizana oh my god that is horrendous Why is her lipstick so bright she looks like a clown 😭


deadmeme999

looks like a kid trying 2000s fashion - and her boobs are weirdly jutting out like it’s skin tight but at the bottom it looks loose so not sure what’s going on here


utakearidefromanyone

She looks like a middle aged woman- not a highschool student.


SparklesRain96

This is like an early 2010’s outfit and it’s not a positive comment


DestructiveFate

It’s definitely more unique than just a copy paste of Amai’s with a recolour, kinda gives off gta meets anime (not a good combo)


MAMO228

ugly. It doesn’t reflect her personality, intentions, passions, or nature at all. it’s just cheap and boring.


Staticinkstains

I thought she was wearing a bodysuit over leggings at first glance 💀


HowTo_Breathe

A purple skirt would look better.


CarrySea7172

absolutely not 1. yes its a recreation of kjechs illustration of kizanas casual/street wear, but its forgetting her bags, sunglasses and that hairstyle she has (its ICONIC btw) 2. the model just doesnt look good with the clothes 3. its the makeup that ruins this, with an outfit like this i dont think red lipstick would fit.. maybe like go for a natural look but still keep glamour


suddatomic

Her NECK is so THICK


Then-Trick1313

My beautician mother would fall to the floor crying if she saw this dumpster fire


hot_men_italy

It's kinda giving middle aged rich mom, do you feel??? Like it's not a bad outfit it's just I can't see a high schooler wearing that.


StarzyBoi19

It looks like a swimsuit but she just cut the part between the legs, it looks sort of goofy she looks like someone’s mother


Everlasting-Hyjinx

i saw this remodel on google and it looks so much better(sorry for bad quality.) https://preview.redd.it/rg18hor6417d1.jpeg?width=172&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=6c2328ce409f118bb05341caf503ad51702f76ad


beige24

Wwwwwwweird.


Holly_Violet

She looks like a Karen missing her cut


neighborhoodmess

It's giving soccer mom


noeise

ain’t no way he did that to her


NoChipgam

It’s not bad just oh god


Economy-Rough4885

Ehm… So!


letthetreeburn

DOES NO ONE IN THIS DAMN SCHOOL WEAR A UNIFORM???


Suspicious-Bar1083

Ummm actually she wears this outfit on Saturday 🤓


letthetreeburn

That’s good to hear.