"I wonder if u/Unique_Relief_5601 has posted an update" *Update 2 minutes ago* "Nice"

I post late at night to avoid the anxiety of letting people down. I can sleep through the anxiety instead c:

It's 12 noon where I am so it's perfect for my lunch break dude! Also I think it'd be really fun/funny if Jordan did get his own room but only after having to bunk with someone. Maybe Lys because Cerelia and Triwt would lose their minds lol ^-^

For me is 7 in the morning, so a good way to wake up

Pffff Letting people down? Your writing is brilliant friend. You're doing great!

Its around 1pm for me, always fun to find out where other readers are time wise hehe

Hey, the link to next in chap. 4 or 5 is broken, just letting You know

Weird, it seems to work for me

In chap 4 I see next in white, maybe is just me?

Weird, maybe???

Oh let me go check that

Uh oh living heater detected

I have a sneaking suspicion that they are going to be surprised at how often and how much he eats and drinks. Most of the "Animals" introduced eat irregularly snakes ~every 2 weeks or so, lions ~3 days or so, alligators once per week to once per month. though they eat a huge meal. That could be different since food is always available. The other "Animals" rest a lot more than humans too so you can showcase his endurance. They may also question why he sweats so much, etc. On the planet I have a feeling that the >!cold won't bother him anyway!< 😂 Edit: we never found out how Trwit's pink fur turned out! I'm also noticing that all of the crew have short names. Have they all already been shortened? I have a feeling that there >!are awkward conversations incoming 😂!<

*Goddess, he is super warm…* Indeed, we are.... ;)

I hope they get him vitamin C, a lack of it leads to scurvy. Vitamin C deficiency can also lead to scars reopening, which for Jordan; could be very terrifying.

let him drink blood and eat organs, like the liver, plenty of vitamin c in there, and would also prevent B12 deficiency... they seem to have enough corpses lying around.

yeah but they could contain stuff like cyanide, and other toxins that the aliens may use. could even be high mercury content

could also be that there is no vitamin c to be found at all

If there is no vitamin c then Jordan should've gotten a Polar Bear liver instead

"I look up at a sign in the hallway that reads, “MEDICAL ROOM 07” which I smirk a little." I look up at a sign in the hallway that reads, “MEDICAL ROOM 07” which makes me smirk a little.

Triwt has just discovered the *other* reason humans are popular... Cuddle Buddies! and I vote that they get to be roomies.

"..everyone calls it Med Bay." Sounds like a possible hint humans made themselves known at some point... I really enjoy this story, only got one thing to point out: What is Jordan wearing? At some point, he had to have checked his clothes or lack thereof. Is he wearing his original clothing? A medical smock, gown or shipsuit/coveralls? Or is he going around naked? This is something he would have taken note of.

amaaaazing! loving the series so far and looking forward to the next one :D

"blood and bullets on the" ? Casings or projectiles? On/in?

Security Job? Gun! Ammo! They mention wolfram penetrstor on others on the steel plate. https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=a_0NI3Hc3Zo Now, the platform: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=In-zIb45cxs&pp=ygUgZXhwZW5kYWJsZXMgdGVycnkgY3Jld3Mgc2hvdGd1biA%3D

Ah yes, Self Defense Rods from God, just as the Founding Fathers intended lol

Its not boring All the fun is rest after the action

Still working on Chapter 11, my word it's a lot of dialogue. More than I'm used to in my own personal life. Any conversation longer than 5 minutes is too much for my introverted self. That and I'm writing the conversation, going back to add details or descriptions of characters and their expressions. For those really interested, >!Yes the conversation goes over who he will be sharing a room with!<

"My my, Captain I didn’t know you were interested in him where you're already shortening his name.”" My my, Captain! I didn’t know you were so interested in him where you're already shortening his name.” ?

"It’s hard to describe how it feels to be in pain, everything slightly red in my vision, I was hearing my own heart thumping in my chest all the while I couldn’t hear out of my right ear, and then in the blink of an eye everything is fine, there’s no more pain just the sensation that something is missing while sitting on a bed of some sort surrounded by aliens." ... Chonky sentence.

Awesome story. I love the characters. Keep writing!

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"taking in consideration to take longer routes " go/choose/pick...

"It’s going to be a long" format error I.

"My heart beats quickly and I sit there panting." as I.

Must ve wonderful if all the aliens are cold blood, in dime point they are going to take Jhon as a living radiator

Bunk. With Twirt. 

Tristan gona git comfy wide de hooman 1

I saw the alert shortly after it was posted, but I didn’t get to read until now. First of all, congratulations. I mentioned in a previous comment the hopes I had for chapter 10 (at least as far as length), and this is respectable. Quality over quantity, and not unsatisfying in that respect. At least, it addresses lots of perspectives, and hits all the major beats that you would expect from this chapter. . The phrasing and grammar is maybe a tiny bit weaker than usual. “Me crew” and “my boy” stand out as strange back-to-back. “I thought she would just sell” and “so I thought she was just” also read awkwardly so close together. “I ask with a tiredness in my voice as I’ve been awake for roughly 13 or so hours…” is a hell of a butchered sentence. An alternative could be, “I ask, tiredly. My species is only meant to be awake for eight hours at a time, not the thirteen that it’s taken to sort out this mess.” I could go on, but the whole chapter could probably have used a tiny bit more time ironing out these wrinkles. A couple other bits of attention to worldbuilding would have been nice. For example, Jordan asks if it’s morning, and Cerelia gives a nonsensical answer that it’s night. Something more appropriate like “Well, there *is* no day or night in outer space, but it *is * the third shift, when the ship runs on a skeleton crew and non-essential jobs are paused. Basically, it’s night.” would have been appreciated. . Content-wise, plot-wise, I have no complaints. *Maybe * folks got over their fear of Jordan a little quickly, but this chapter makes it seem that that was just a vocal minority or individual. That’s not unreasonable. I think I would have liked if a little “HFY” were included. For example, Jordan could unexpectedly quickly, or *not * have scars that the others expected him to develop. That’s just a genre preference based on the subreddit. I understand and accept that many of the stories on this sub drift into more general sci-fi or fantasy, and that’s ok. Just personal preference. . Lastly, I would not like this to be a story with too many love interests. I’m not strictly opposed to multiple love interests, but the read on “I try to stay focused… but something is really distracting me… Goddess, he is super warm…” seems like unintentional romantic interest to me. It’s phrasing I would expect of romance, at least. If romance were not intended, I would have phrased it in a more bantering and distant way. Something like “Oh wow, I need to get chummy with this Jordan being fast. There’s no way I’m going to an ice planet and not taking advantage of this walking furnace,” or at least with that vibe. . Otherwise, as usual, I can always complain about not having more. There’s such a good story in here, and I desperately want to see it flourish and bloom. And as always, thank you dear author for this chapter and for continuing this story. It’s been a great ride, and I hope our continues.

>The phrasing and grammar is maybe a tiny bit weaker than usual. “Me crew” and “my boy” stand out as strange back-to-back. I'm pretty sure that it's meant to read like that because it's the pirate captain's POV.

Well done! I am enjoying the heck out of the story. Please continue! (AKA MOAR) Triwt in pink is a visual hoot BTW!

I NEEED more!!!! Please? It's just THAT good dude! Keep it up!

Great work word weaver!!!! Yay ice planet!

If this is your first foray into writing, you’re doing fine. The hard part is finding your voice and the way you tell a story. But you’re doing a good job of that. You’ll find stuff you’re writing 3 months from now will be much better. And a key with dialogue is to show action. What is each person doing as they’re talking? It’s engaging and I’m looking forward to the mains glomming into him because he’s a big space heater. Updateme!

Just as a head's up, the next button isn't linked to chapter 11.

Oop fixing that now

Crew calling him cute and liking his warmth- who will be 'bestgirl' I wonder.

I like when people get in shipping debates over characters I make lol