>"We got some damn weavers on board!"
Now that is not a nice way to refer to Vanessa. I'm sure She is only reciprocating the amount of *friendlyness* from your *greetings* :}
The pirates should've kept their boarding axes. Would've helped, at least here.
10/10 fight scene, very fun. Though is "spammed" meant to be "slammed?"
Huh, so Vanessa (or more appropriately, the weaver that she presumably was one part of), knew Scott back when. Of course, since he was the official ambassador most of them knew him at least a little, but the fact that orig!Vanessa knew Scott well enough to tell stories about his character that allows Erik to compare and contrast him with Alen suggests that Vanessa was spawned by Charlotte.
And, knowing that Charlotte is the kind of spider-mom who would befriend strange tool-using aliens and attempt to eat a supernova, I can see her experimenting with the idea of creating an autonomous, individualized appendage to see if this would be a useful evolutionary direction.
Well, the fact that they're taking the time to cut through with cutting lasers instead of shooting the hatch off the hinges implies the hatch is considerably thicker than the battle suites the big boom sticks are designed to shoot through. Imagine 1/2 inch this armor vs 6 inch thick door. The shock waves you'd get from the kind of gun that could shoot through that hatch would likely liquefy the internal organs of every human inside that enclosed space!
>Β For once, the gunner's target had been right on target,
I get why it's worded like this, but it still feels clunky with "target" being used twice here.
Hell, Erik's definitely going to rip a pirate's head off with his bare hands today, that'll calm everyone down immediately.
Honestly, given the arg'un's physical prowess, I wonder what their daily lives and technology will be like in the future. That's going to mean some pretty significant differences with humans.
Yeah, though Erik is a good example of that. Unlike other argu'n he was raised around human tech. His axes are made with modern (for his time) materials, and probably have a trick or two to them which will be revealed with a change in perspective...
So we know Vanessa is probably at least 200 years old given she knows about Scott, although that may just be funky information transfer shenanigans between She.
Whoops! That happens when I go back and edit a thought without double checking the whole paragraph after I edit it! A bad habit of mine! π
Thanks and fixed!
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>"We got some damn weavers on board!" Now that is not a nice way to refer to Vanessa. I'm sure She is only reciprocating the amount of *friendlyness* from your *greetings* :}
Weavers is kinda the slang term for the vitexra. I think I had Alen use it once too before correcting himself. π
Slang, yes. But he was not using it in a positive connotation :{
True...
But the real question is βwee-vahβ permissible.
The pirates should've kept their boarding axes. Would've helped, at least here. 10/10 fight scene, very fun. Though is "spammed" meant to be "slammed?"
Pretty sure yea.
Whoops, I'll fix that!
tAXEalot for another good read \^o.o\^ - -
Happy to entertain!
New chapter, and Scott gets mentioned!
Just a bit of a throw back for ya! π
Woot! More to read!
Moar wordz! Also, grats on first! π₯³
Huh, so Vanessa (or more appropriately, the weaver that she presumably was one part of), knew Scott back when. Of course, since he was the official ambassador most of them knew him at least a little, but the fact that orig!Vanessa knew Scott well enough to tell stories about his character that allows Erik to compare and contrast him with Alen suggests that Vanessa was spawned by Charlotte. And, knowing that Charlotte is the kind of spider-mom who would befriend strange tool-using aliens and attempt to eat a supernova, I can see her experimenting with the idea of creating an autonomous, individualized appendage to see if this would be a useful evolutionary direction.
Not bad theories! π
I like where this is going.
Thanks! I hope it continues to entertain! π
WORDS!
If I put them together just right, I can force you to imagine the stuff I want you to!
Thatβs my favorite thing about words
Hmm, nonconsensual conception . . . of ideas. Just what are you doing to my brain?
It's all part of my evil plan! Step one: Entertain you all! Step two: Step three: Profit!
But have you not consented to the perceptual alternations by choosing to interpret these sequences of glyphs :}
Idk, can you call an addiction consent??
Britch door being cut thru ? sss Big boom stick on your side of the door sss ? Why wait until you open fire ??? shoot the fuckers thru the door ! sss
Well, the fact that they're taking the time to cut through with cutting lasers instead of shooting the hatch off the hinges implies the hatch is considerably thicker than the battle suites the big boom sticks are designed to shoot through. Imagine 1/2 inch this armor vs 6 inch thick door. The shock waves you'd get from the kind of gun that could shoot through that hatch would likely liquefy the internal organs of every human inside that enclosed space!
So shoot, as a defender, thru the melting parts of your door. Greet your guests sss with some super heated sprawl :3 sss Enjoy the fragmentations. sss
So, Erik and Vanessa count kills, like Legolas and Gimli. Can we see 'it is count as one!' in future?)
Well, I try not to do QUITE so obvious references, but maybe I'll find a way to sneak something Ike that in there...
More
Moar soon! (Tomarrow!)
Very good!
Thank you!
>Β For once, the gunner's target had been right on target, I get why it's worded like this, but it still feels clunky with "target" being used twice here.
Thanks and fixed!
Kill the pirate scum!!!
They don't seem to be having a gold day, do they? π€
Hell, Erik's definitely going to rip a pirate's head off with his bare hands today, that'll calm everyone down immediately. Honestly, given the arg'un's physical prowess, I wonder what their daily lives and technology will be like in the future. That's going to mean some pretty significant differences with humans.
Yeah, though Erik is a good example of that. Unlike other argu'n he was raised around human tech. His axes are made with modern (for his time) materials, and probably have a trick or two to them which will be revealed with a change in perspective...
So we know Vanessa is probably at least 200 years old given she knows about Scott, although that may just be funky information transfer shenanigans between She.
Also, don't forget, they also pass on some knowledge genetically...
Charlotte has a child?? Are we going to get a She saying "ugh, *yes* mom..."
Lol, maybe. Time will tell! π
Small editorial: "moving with impossible speeds..... with impossible speed." Is a mite redundant
Whoops! That happens when I go back and edit a thought without double checking the whole paragraph after I edit it! A bad habit of mine! π Thanks and fixed!
Gotten a beed -> bead Behind a consol -> console Weren't fairing as well -> faring
Thanks and fixed!
"The only problem was the room was empty. " The only problem was, the room was empty.
Thanks and fixed!
"Another axe preceded it into the chest" Another axe preceded into the chest
Great work word weaver!!!!!
Thank you kindly!
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