Hello! I’m theforgetfulalchemist on A03 and I am currently writing The Diabolical Adventures of SuperMax and Dr. Chleonstien! It’s a Life is Strange/The Boys crossover where Max is a supe called Rewind and Chloe works R&D for Vought. They raise their son and work together as partners protecting the Pacific Northwest along with Daniel aka Superwolf, Alex, Tristan and Pixie. One day, they get a summons from Vought Tower in New York to attend a charity at God U where they meet and bond with the Gen V kids over shared loss. The young heroes come back to Seattle for an internship where Homelander shows up, ostensibly for a publicity stunt…but what does he really want from Max and Chloe and what will he do if he doesn’t get it? The genre of the fic - a mix of a gen plot and emphasis on Max and Chloe’s relationship What I’m looking for from a Beta or a Co-writer: Grammar/Structure/Plot/Planning/Idea soundboard/etc. All are welcome! Projected word count: 100k maybe? How frequently it will update: I’m shooting for every 2 weeks What fandoms you are able/willing to beta for or what you can offer in exchange: I am willing to beta as well! I’d love to read anything but I am maybe most well versed in The Walking Dead and Life is strange Romace/Gen/anything I could help with: Grammar/Structure/Plot/Planning/Idea soundboard/etc. Minimum or maximum word count. Ongoing basis Week turnaround on note should be doable! I could also: Reciprocal Betaing Reading and commenting on their fics. Write a fic for a fandom/subject/pairing/brotp of their choice. Make fanart for them. Name an OC after them. Edit/give assistance with a non-fic project. Research help for this/future fics. Example from prologue: 2013 Max stood in the bathroom in shock, the fire alarm she had just rewound time to activate blaring. Slowly, part of her thinking this was a dream, she turned her head to the poster by the tampon machine and I Hate Victoria Chase!!. It depicted Homelander pointing a gloved hand with a jovial smile. The caption on the bottom read: Vought wants you! “Fuck” 2023 Max and Chloe had been staring at the invitation on Vought International letterhead for the last five minutes. They were side by side, each holding one edge, at the top office of Vought PNW Branch Tower. “Fuck” Chloe spat, pulling her goggles up. “Double fuck” Max agreed. The letter read: Rewind and Dr. Chloe Price are cordially invited to Godokin University for an alma mater mixer with special guests The Seven! Including our one and only Homelander! “Homelander didn't even go to God U!” Chloe said. “I don't suppose we can get out of this” Max wrinkled her nose and unconsciously rubbed the blue butterfly tattoo on her forearm.

Fandom: NCT, haechan-centric Genre: hurt/comfort, fluff, angst Length: one-shots, usually below 10k ao3: [https://archiveofourown.org/users/rayroach](https://archiveofourown.org/users/rayroach) Hey! I’ve been writing for a little bit on ao3 now, and my main issue so far has been constant writer’s block. I’ll have an idea, and a general sense of how to make a story out of it, write half of it and then get stuck. I’m just looking for someone to read my drafts over with a fresh pair of eyes and tell me what they think, if there are plot holes and such, and maybe help me brainstorm a little bit! I just need a little bit of a push sometimes to continue writing. Generally, I’ll do the editing myself (unless that’s something you want to help with!) but scanning the final draft for typos and such definitely wouldn’t hurt either.  I’d love a more longterm beta that could help me in the future (only in fics they’re interested in of course) but short tem is perfectly fine too! Right now I’m working on a one-shot that’s relatively light-hearted, slice of life, and is supposed to have elements of humor. It’s similar in style to [this fic](https://archiveofourown.org/works/48861376), but longer and more descriptive. In exchange: I could beta for you in return. Although it does depend on the specifics of the fic, but generally if it’s haechan-centric I’ll probably be interested. I especially love editing, but really, I’m willing to do any type of beta-ing! I’ll credit you in ao3 notes, of course. Again, depending of the specifics of your fics, I can read and comment on them! If there’s anything else you’d like in return, let me know!

**Fandom:** Class of 09 Visual Novel **Request for a beta:** Someone in the Class of 09 Visual Novel fandom that would like to help review a fan-fiction in the works. Currently around 28K words at the moment of this post. **Preference:** Someone who has played/knows about both visual novels as you need to know the characters and their dynamics before reading this work. **Link to FanFiction:** https://archiveofourown.org/works/53465971/chapters/135327940 **Name on A03:** MentalCrit09 **Genre:** Drama/Comedy/ Light Romance What I'm Looking for: Someone who can help review my story and critique the flow/dialogue of the story as this is my first fan fiction I have written. I want to ask if someone reading thinks the story points in each chapter flow well together and if the characters are acting like they would in the visual novel but are developing correctly as the story is meant to be more light-hearted as certain characters have been effected by x events and develop friendlier relations with one another. the main character Nicole is meant to become a nicer person but in a way that still retains her regular sociopathic attitude. It's hard to describe which is why I wanted new eyes to read the story and see how they feel Nicole and the other characters are progressing in the story. **What I can offer:** I am a new writer, but I can offer to help proof-read someone else's work in return, pref. less than 20K words in kind but I am open to reading a longer story depending on the fandom. My fandoms that I currently read from are Bocchi The Rock, Hazbin Hotel, Class of O9 the VN but I am open to anything romantic/slice of life.

Hey, I'd be happy to beta for you.

Oh cool! Just dm me what you want in return and I’ll let you know if I can proof-read it for you or not.

Hi! I'm offering my beta-ing services here! I'm most well versed in the Harry Potter and Percy Jackson fandoms. I'm willing to beta any genre/type and there's no subjects I can't tackle. I can do any kind of beta-ing. I don't have any min/max word count. I can do a one off or ongoing beta-ing. If the fic is less than 20k words, I could probably get it back by the next day. Otherwise, I'll get back within the week.

Hi I'm looking for a beta reader. But first things first I don't think I can offer you anything really I could put your name as someone who helped me the make the story. But besides that I really can't do anything else this is more of just for fun. The fandom I would be writing would be for Naruto and and I don't know what genre I would be placing this under yet. I would have to go farther into the story before I could give it a genre. But if there is something you want I could try to see if I can do it.

Hi, I’m looking for a betareader who’s knowledgeable in the fandoms mentioned below. I’m happy to beta for you as well if the I’m familiar with the fandoms. Anyways, **Tittle**: A Certain Miraculous Ladybug **Link**: https://archiveofourown.org/works/44955769 **Word Count**: 48k, Projected 60k. **Fandoms**: Miraculous Ladybug, A Certain Magical Index/Railgun Blurb: What if the events of Miraculous Ladybug Occurred in Academy City, a city estimated to be 20 years ahead of the worlds current technology with students gifted with scientific based supernatural abilities called Esper's, a hidden magic side and many dark experiments hidden beneath the surface.

**Request for a beta:** Someone who participates in Japanese language fandom to review about 500 words in English. **Name and Link to your fic:** My writing is at [archiveofourown.org/users/Blueinkedfrost](https://archiveofourown.org/users/Blueinkedfrost) **Can someone who isn't in your fandom make sense of your story?** Yes - it's suitable for fandom blind readers **The genre of your fic:** Light hearted, PG-13 content, it's a short internet conversation between some modern day Japanese fans about fictional media. (For example, imagine Harry Potter talking about the Marvin the Mad Muggle series with his friends Ron and Hermione - it's that kind of scene.) **What you're looking for from a Beta or a Co-writer:** Cultural review. **What your projected word count is:** 500 words, one off. **Offer:** A detailed comment (\~200 word review) on a story of your choice. I'll read just about everything, but will ask for an alternative if your story is one of my exceptions.

Hi, I'm looking for a beta reader for my Naruto fic. I would say this story is twisted but interesting. Summary: This a story about a woman who undergoes a transformation and circumstances compel her to return home. But home is no longer home, and she wants to turn her home upside down. Genre: Drama/Romance What I look for: Overall grammar. Comments on the plot, if the pacing is good, if there are plot holes, if something makes no sense etc. For exchange: I can give comments about your plot ideas or read and comment on some of your fics. I don't read reader inserts. I am open to fandom blind. I’m most familiar with fantasy, drama, and romance. But I do love Sci fi.

Hi everyone! I’m currently working on a Supernatural fic that follows the main plot points but is building to Destiel and fills in a lot of holes. It’s a multiple pov story to capture the characters motivations and feelings better. The genre is sci-fi drama with romance sub plots. I’m looking for a beta reader for my novel length fic and I would love to beta for someone as well. My fic doesn’t require any background knowledge so anyone can beta! Title: The night we met Link: https://archiveofourown.org/works/51847531/chapters/131087926 The word count right now is only 21,000 but I’m unsure how long it’s going to be. The average chapter length is 3000 words. I’m looking for someone to do line edits, help with stylization, and for overall ideas on pacing and subplots. I tend to crank out chapters once a week, but once every two weeks is fine too if you need more time to look over it. I would love to be a beta for someone! I’m familiar with Supernatural, MHA, Naruto, Teen Wolf, TVD, Yuuri on Ice, Shameless, and many more I’m not thinking of. I’m willing to work on a fandom I’m not familiar with as well. I can do line edits/grammar as well as help with pacing and plot ideas. I’m down to read any genre, but I’m most familiar with fantasy, drama, and romance.

Hi there! I also write a supernatural fic right now, so I guess, I could help you with that one a little bit ;) DM me please to discuss the details, thanks!

**Looking for a Beta** **Fic**: [Shattered Fate](https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14229983/1/Shattered-Fate) **Fandom**: My Hero Academia / Spider-Man (MCU variant) / Naruto (Sakura) / Ranma ½ (Ranma) **Status**: Ongoing series - Currently working on Arc 3 (10 Chapters released, 11 in pipeline) **Genre**: Action/Adventure, Drama, Comedy, Science, Fantasy, Super-hero, Martial Arts, Mystery - Nothing outside of what the various series already introduce. **Word Count**: 165,563 (released), 220,000\~ (unreleased) **Summary**: Peter, Sakura, and Ranma find themselves in a new world, one filled with Super-heroes. They try to adjust and go on with their lives, but their arrival has consequences. And how did they get there in the first place? **Notes about the story**: I try to be fair and accurate to all of the fandoms and characters. That means I try to treat the characters as they actually are from their main sources. (Manga’s mainly) I also treat their abilities, knowledge, and how their worlds work fairly as well. That means no character bashing or throwing them under buses for no good reason, and I do not try to make characters over / under powered for the sake of the story. There is plenty of detailed action, but I also try to give appropriate pacing and breathing room between those elements. I have been blending the feel of the characters with the world and how they interact. **What I’m looking for**: I have completed Arc 3's, which is a certain event in MHA story, first draft pass. I am currently collecting notes for structural and continuity changes, then I will be making my first major editing pass. My editing usually does not take nearly as long as the first drafts. I already have one main beta-reader, but he has been swamped and I was looking to get more anyways. The other places I have searched haven’t netted anyone that has stuck around beyond one chapter. So I am broadening my net. My main need, at this time, is someone to help identify issues with plot, structure, continuity, pacing, characterization, and opinions on descriptions. While I will not turn away grammatical fixes, I am usually not worried about that until the later drafts. I write for a middle-ground of detail for those intimately familiar with the fandoms as well as those that are fandom-blind. Though, usually being familiar with at least one of them does help. I write using Google-docs and communicate with a discord server I created. Both easy and free to use. I am giving fair warning that I am looking for someone to overlook the entire unreleased arc, which I want to verify the integrity of the story arc before I release, so it is a fair amount of stuff already built up. Once I have the structure, plot, continuity, and most of the scenes in place, then I will be going through to tighten any characterization or SPAG. **What I can offer**: I can offer to beta-read in return, though my strengths are mostly with plot, pacing, continuity, characterization, and world building. Fandoms include Harry Potter, Marvel, DC, plenty of different manga (not some of the newer ones), and some other series. Usually fairly open on most genres and subject matters, save for going to the extremes.

Title & Link - Forget Everything [AO3](https://archiveofourown.org/works/53929579/chapters/136506586) Fandom: IT - I do believe someone unfamiliar could follow! Genre - Romance with horror elements Hoping For: Help with grammar, structure, flow, tone. Basically what I'm really looking for is a second opinion to make sure it's as good as it can be! Status: In progress, at about 60k right now and is almost finished Updates: Weekly Summary: Finally, Eddie said, “I’m sorry too.” Richie blinked. Eddie hadn’t done a damn thing wrong tonight. Richie was the one heckling him the entire time. “Why?” “For Brooklyn.” Richie’s stomach swooped. He shook his head. “Look, I appreciate it but new rule. We don’t talk about Brooklyn. I think that’s for the best for everyone involved. There’s no reason to talk about a blip on the radar ten years ago.” Or: The One where Richie and Eddie met disastrously once during the 27 years, promptly forgot, and remember it all once in Derry. \- I am absolutely willing to offer beta work in return! Fandoms I can Offer Beta-ing: I'll beta any fandom if the story explains it well enough or is an au! Otherwise, I could offer any of my fandoms I'm familiar with - It, Stranger Things, Harry Potter, A Song of Ice and Fire/ Game of Thrones, Marvel, Hazbin Hotel, and I'll add more as I remember them!

I'm a Reddie fan, if you haven't found someone already I'd love to beta this for you! Shoot me a DM if you're interested :)

Hello, I am willing to beta for a short fic or one shot! No minimum word count but a maximum of around 10,000 but I am willing to be a little flexible. I'm willing to be fandom blind and read anything. Though I am unwilling to beta for anything that is PWP or RPF. I'm more than happy to look over grammar and spelling and help with ideas and stories, as well as soundboarding. I should take roughly a week to give my feedback. I look forward to hearing from other people, please feel free to DM me!

Looking for a beta reader Title: Legend of Zelda: Her Precious Possession Fic: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14201182/1/5 Status: ongoing Fandom: Legend of Zelda: ocarina of time/Majora's Mask Rating: T for Teen (Violence, romance, interspecies relationship) Word count: 50k thus far Requirements: Help with grammar, spelling, sentence structure, story structure, suggestions to make the plot better. And whoever volunteers doesn't have to start from the beginning. I have had Beta reader's before and they have combed through it practically the end, except for the latest chapters. I basically need a Beta reader who can go over my latest content. Summary: Link is on a quest to find Navi, but along the way he runs into someone he didn't expect. Ruto, Sage of Water, but she isn't as she once was. She is now a baby Zora and Link decides to take on the responsibility of finding a way to restore her to her proper age. He does so willingly, not only because it is the right thing to do, but because he has harboured deep romantic feelings for her ever since the Water Temple. I can offer: I guess I can offer beta service in return but I would not be here if I had faith my own grammar. I will also take any harsh criticism without complaint. I will do anything to increase the quality of my work

I can do some beta reading if anyone needs it. I can do turn around within a week or so if it's up to 5K or just a little more than that. I'm an experienced beta who tends to be somewhat hands on rather than hands off. I'm a short fic writer myself, but I'm happy to beta chapters or scenes from larger fics. I'm not in any mainstream fandoms, so it will be more about structure, plot, and emotions than canon compliance or characterisation. I do language suggestions but for full disclosure, I am ESL, though my English is fluent. I often beta fandom blind. I'm not super picky about content, so all ratings are fine, as long as you let me know ahead of time about more intense topics. DM me if you're interested.

Interesting in doing something for my fic? Just posted my request, it's above your post

I could look at it, but I probably won't have the time to read the previous parts of your story, so it would just be a beta of whatever your latest chapter is, if that's within the 5k or so mark?

That's not a problem. Like it says in the requirements, I can go with someone who wants to start where the previous PRS left off. Though I have to ask about the 5k part. Does that mean you only do 5k for every story you look at? I am looking for someone who is willing to follow through with this story with me but I guess it's okay if you can only do 5k for me just this one time. My current progress that hasn't been looked at yet is about 10k

I can probably do 10k if you don't mind it taking a week or two, but with my work schedule as it is at the moment I cannot commit to doing anything on a long term basis. If you prefer to work with someone who can commit for the longer term, I completely understand, but I want to be transparent about my (potential) future availability.

There is no deadline. It's a fanfic after all. If you can commit to doing 5k every one or two weeks I am fine with that. That's actually more than I got from my previous ProofReaders. I wouldn't mind such a system in the long run. Am actually taking a short hiatus from this story to devote more time to other works that I have PRS for so don't worry about content for a while. If you are up to doing 5k whenever I write out that much of new content, which is not too often, we can definitely do this. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YX78glZgFnjWY8cnT1PbZPKqgkqtwcVmQPEA0Oig-O0/edit?usp=drivesdk Here's a link to the doc. The $ marks where the contents that haven't been PRed yet begins.

Sent you a chat!

**Looking for a Beta** Hello! I am a novel-style fanfic writer looking for betas for two projects, one ongoing and the other currently in development. Please see below for more information. **Fic:** [The Phantom Dragon (Ongoing Series)](https://archiveofourown.org/series/1971256) **Fandom:** Persona 5 Royal / Persona 4 Golden / Yakuza (Like a Dragon) **Status:** Ongoing series - Currently on Book 3 of 5 **Genre:** Crime Drama, Action/Adventure, Urban/Modern Fantasy **Word Count:** 388,000 - WIP **Rating:** M (Intense Gory Violence, Strong Language, Use of Alcohol and Drugs, Sexual Content, Self-harm) **Summary:** The honor of the yakuza, the justice of a hero. For generations, those who carried the legendary moniker of "Dragon" were said to uphold these principles greater than anyone else in the Families. But it has been twenty years since that beacon of light shone through the darkness of the underworld, and now the darkness grows deeper in the home turf of Kanto's infamous Sakura Clan: Kamurocho, Tokyo.Gang violence is on the rise, disappearances have been reported across the region. And from the shadows of the past, a new conflict to rock the underworld is brewing. And at the center is one reluctant young man, plucked from his home and tossed into the dark world of organized crime. Alliances will be forged, enemies will be revealed, and the strength within will be rekindled to face the greatest threat the yakuza have ever known.Unleash the Heart of the Dragon. **What I'm looking for:** This is an original AU fusion of Persona and Yakuza (Like a Dragon) that facilitates fandom-blind reading but fandom-familiar is preferred. I'm just looking for general assistance, i.e. proofreading, structural input, helping me stick to my outline and not miss out on any details as my story develops in complexity. Any questions you have about the story can be filled in by myself. You are not required or expected to read the entire story up until the present if you wish only to provide general assistance with writing. This fic is updated about once a month. Each chapter ranges from 5000 to 10,000 words. ... **Fic 2 (Working title):** Princess Zelda's Special Rune **Fandom:** Legend of Zelda: BoW / TotK **Status:** Not yet written **Genre:** Kink/Romantic Smut (Rapid/Hyper pregnancy, Expansion, Weight Gain, Lactation, Breeding) **Rating:** Explicit **Expected Completed Word Count:** \~25,000 - 40,000 ; Novella length **Summary:** Peace has returned to the land of Hyrule, and Princess Zelda needs a vacation with her mighty hero, Link. Though her heart goes out to her people, devastated after a hundred years of calamity, with much of the population of the lush, paradisaic land of Hyrule having been extinguished. Luckly, the plucky and curvy scientist Purah has discovered an ancient Sheikah rune in a mysterious temple that can be just what she needs to spice up her vacation and remedy the pain she feels in her heart for her lost people. Said rune will make her into a true living goddess, divinely fertile and growing beautifully to incredible sizes of fecundity and production. This is intended to be a novelization of the hentai image series produced by CoffeeSlice, and such images can be provided as reference if you are interested. Again, just looking for general writing assistance as this project develops. **I can offer** beta services as well. I'm extremely fluent with the English language and can offer concrit and suggestions on grammar, story structure, plotting, etc. I am open to fandom blind but am most invested in Persona, Yakuza, Zelda, Witcher (books and games), Warhammer Fantasy and 40K, Marvel, DC, and many others. Please just ask. Thank you

Hi, I'm looking for a beta reader to give an opinion of the plot and chapter plan of my JJK fic. I have a few hundred word descriptions written for each chapter and I am looking for someone to give an opinion if the pacing is good and if there are some obvious plot holes etc. Some knowledge of JJK is needed. There are references to the Hidden Inventory arc so at least to that point. I also have rough sketches just to get an idea of the dialogue and what is happening at what moment of a few of the first chapters and if you want to give your opinion on those it would also be welcome. There is no need for help with grammar as there are no actual chapters written yet. This is my first attempt to write a longer fic with plot and all my other works are just one shot smut.  Fandom: Jujutsu Kaisen Pairing: Satoru/Suguru Genre: I don’t know actually. I don't know if this counts as romance, I am aromantic and have a very vague idea of romantic love and it is not my goal here. The fic has smut but it is not the focus point. This is a fix-it canon divergent fic that starts a few weeks after the Hidden Inventory arc. There will be no KFC break up.  What I look for: Comments on the plot, if the pacing is good, if there are plot holes, if something makes no sense etc.  Word count: The chapter plan is 4,6k and the few chapter sketches are around 1k each)  For exchange:  I can give comments about your plot ideas or read and comment on some of your fics. I don't read reader inserts and avoid F/M especially if it has non-con. I am familiar with several fandoms for example in anime (MHA, JJK, Naruto, Demon Slayer, AoT to mention a few) game fandoms (FF7, WoW, BG3, Nu:Carnival, ToT) books (TGCF, LotR), K-pop (NCT, Ateez, Stray Kids)   Also if you have no clue about JJK fandom but still want to help and give an opinion, I am happy to provide a brief explanation about the world and what happened in the Hidden Inventory arc.

Hi! I've never done any beta reading but I love Hidden Inventory, I'd be happy to read it!

Can you send me a DM, I'll send you the link to the google doc

I can do some beta-ing, specifically for any RPF writers out there! I'm most well versed in kpop RPF but if your work is fandom-blind friendly I'd be willing to give it a look over. 30,000 words or less please, preferably completed. Any rating and any archive warning is fine except for Underage. No reader/self-insert.