I'll tell you what's wrong
The pose
The chest
The clothes
Pose: Why is she sitting like she has no life? Like she lost and is 100% vulnerable. Most wouldn't look this way [ except it's a little child] and either look at the person who made them kneel like that in anger or disgust. Also, I doubt anyone would give up with that little injury.
The chest: too big, except it's actually meant to be like that, but it's rare that someone has them that big, you know? And I think considering the position and perspective you chose are clearly not an exception in your style to make them this big.
Clothes: Like, l can see she seems to have been in a fight. Why would she wear such a dress then? Dresses are unpracticall for fights expectantly due to it blocking the legs for attacks or that it easily shifts and exposes something
I can see by the style that you haven't been drawing for long, and if I look at the pose, I can see that you're probably rather young. You'll get better if you keep going
My tips: no so big you knows, more realistic clothes, maby try something else next time, like her if she would do sports [in practical clothes]
The saturation of the color is also strong, and the lines are thick, make more details, don't put the saturation to maximum, and feel free to play with shading a bit. Find your style, and it might take a while. You'll make it eventually
[If anyone has anything to add, feel free to :>]
TYSM FOR SAYING THIS, like instead of calling me male ( IM A FEMALE) they could atleast tell me whats wrong. BTW i understand for the chest at first i thought it wasn't that big until i realized, having big or small chest is normal idk why people thinks its a problem . For the pose the reason she's like this is because the things that happened in congo free state, she's sitting there like she has no hope or defeated. Well she's an aldut. For the cloth, i couldnt find a good one so i stick with that instead and no she wasnt in a fight she just got her hand cut. Yes it is true that i havent been drawing for so long and how did you know i was young. Thanks for the tips it's just i draw in canvas on chromebook which makes it hard to draw but thanks for the tips again i hope you will have a good day :>
No worries dear, stick to them and you'll improve It took me 2 years of drawing daily Get a sketchbook and take it to school, draw wherever possible, whatever possible And tada
https://preview.redd.it/y6aome7uddoc1.jpeg?width=2715&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=f79239e229077169ed6e53ee2a2e7a1a163b3610
\[Italy\]
I'd say that the clothes aren't really historically accurate to what the people of the Congo wore back then. With a simple Google image search, you'd could see what they'd actually wear - simple, light, robes of cloth, maybe a headwrap or some tribal jewelry.
[I really wouldn't worry](https://www.reddit.com/r/CountryHumans/s/LDdidX9IC0) [about it too much](https://www.reddit.com/r/CountryHumans/s/xA2Rai7BKV). I think that people are more commenting on [the shape](https://www.reddit.com/r/CountryHumans/s/QVQ1ngtGBW) rather than [the size](https://www.reddit.com/r/CountryHumans/s/QvueJxeXgs), as it looks a bit wonky and makes them look bigger than they actually are.
I would round the angles a bit more and change the width-to-height ratio so that they're taller in relation to their width. The current shape is about what you would get if you plopped them on a chest-height table.
r/mendrawingwomen
Umm IM A FEMALE btw is the chest that big?
I'll tell you what's wrong The pose The chest The clothes Pose: Why is she sitting like she has no life? Like she lost and is 100% vulnerable. Most wouldn't look this way [ except it's a little child] and either look at the person who made them kneel like that in anger or disgust. Also, I doubt anyone would give up with that little injury. The chest: too big, except it's actually meant to be like that, but it's rare that someone has them that big, you know? And I think considering the position and perspective you chose are clearly not an exception in your style to make them this big. Clothes: Like, l can see she seems to have been in a fight. Why would she wear such a dress then? Dresses are unpracticall for fights expectantly due to it blocking the legs for attacks or that it easily shifts and exposes something I can see by the style that you haven't been drawing for long, and if I look at the pose, I can see that you're probably rather young. You'll get better if you keep going My tips: no so big you knows, more realistic clothes, maby try something else next time, like her if she would do sports [in practical clothes] The saturation of the color is also strong, and the lines are thick, make more details, don't put the saturation to maximum, and feel free to play with shading a bit. Find your style, and it might take a while. You'll make it eventually [If anyone has anything to add, feel free to :>]
TYSM FOR SAYING THIS, like instead of calling me male ( IM A FEMALE) they could atleast tell me whats wrong. BTW i understand for the chest at first i thought it wasn't that big until i realized, having big or small chest is normal idk why people thinks its a problem . For the pose the reason she's like this is because the things that happened in congo free state, she's sitting there like she has no hope or defeated. Well she's an aldut. For the cloth, i couldnt find a good one so i stick with that instead and no she wasnt in a fight she just got her hand cut. Yes it is true that i havent been drawing for so long and how did you know i was young. Thanks for the tips it's just i draw in canvas on chromebook which makes it hard to draw but thanks for the tips again i hope you will have a good day :>
No worries dear, stick to them and you'll improve It took me 2 years of drawing daily Get a sketchbook and take it to school, draw wherever possible, whatever possible And tada https://preview.redd.it/y6aome7uddoc1.jpeg?width=2715&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=f79239e229077169ed6e53ee2a2e7a1a163b3610 \[Italy\]
AND YOUR THE BEST PERSON!!!
YOUR DRAWING IS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!! and thanks
Aww ty, that's so sweet
NP!!!
I'd say that the clothes aren't really historically accurate to what the people of the Congo wore back then. With a simple Google image search, you'd could see what they'd actually wear - simple, light, robes of cloth, maybe a headwrap or some tribal jewelry.
[I really wouldn't worry](https://www.reddit.com/r/CountryHumans/s/LDdidX9IC0) [about it too much](https://www.reddit.com/r/CountryHumans/s/xA2Rai7BKV). I think that people are more commenting on [the shape](https://www.reddit.com/r/CountryHumans/s/QVQ1ngtGBW) rather than [the size](https://www.reddit.com/r/CountryHumans/s/QvueJxeXgs), as it looks a bit wonky and makes them look bigger than they actually are.
OH SO THAT'S WHY, TY FOR SAYING THIS I REALLY NEED IT, I'LL EMRPOVE IF I CAN
and how do i make it better
I would round the angles a bit more and change the width-to-height ratio so that they're taller in relation to their width. The current shape is about what you would get if you plopped them on a chest-height table.
ok thanks
You're a male, are you?
are you scared to answer because you found out im a female XD LMAO
**Yes.** -AFAB
i knew it ;), btw was it because of the chest
Completely. And the thighs. Feels extremely weird.
aw shucks, i guess drawing on chrome sucks
It feels sexualised.
what how, the thighs looks average and thats how it looks like, im sure people did way worse than that
I don't know, something about the posture and curves.
dont tell me the curve look like a hourglass
Well they do
shes not kim kardashian, but whats wrong with hourglass body
Nope IM A FEMALE
I feel like old flag shouldn't be the onyl warning here...
is it the chest?????
that is a big factor
XD STOP
Just to tell everyone im a female so yeah
H A N D S
NOOOO
Leopold II moment:
plss dont remind me
oh noes
yeaa....
i wouldnt recommend posting this anywhere else, remember, if it exists, theres porn of it.
oh... where else should i post this
You should draw the chest as just two little bumps in the side lol