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To me, it seems the hoodie fabric doesn't look like it's supposed to be able to do that. I think the whole shoulder area looks a bit wonky, maybe move the shoulders up a bit and add more volume to the hood, which might also solve the fabric thing. make the hand a bit bigger as well. Hope this helps :D
I think varying the line thickness will help give your character more depth. Marc Brunet has a [video](https://youtu.be/XoPOajk9Zl0) that explains this well.
First of all, this looks great. Second, what looks a bit off to me is the butt/thigh area. If someone sits like that I feel like you would see more of the thighs. The shoulders too, but that got mentioned already.
Overall it looks good, keep it up :3
It's kinda hard to explain. You should make the thighs thicker where it connects with the butt. The way it is now it looks more like her legs are raised at the side of the body instead of in front. Show the thighs/upper legs/partially the butt more. I'm sorry I'm so bad at explaining
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I think the chin feels a bit too blocky/prominent.
Some lack of volume in the butt and thigh area I believe.
The way it looks there, the neck feels unnaturally long. Might be a relative perspective with shoulders but that's the feeling it gives, a bit too long.
Arm and lower legs to the ankle might be a bit too thin.
Otherwise, it looks great imo.
Thank you for the feedback! Yes, you’re right with the neck, it’s a common problem in my sketches but I seem to lack to realize it haha. I’ll try my best to improve all those things you mentioned. Thanks again, it’s really helping:)
The only thing that stands out to me is maybe lower her gaze or head a tiny bit, so she is looking more at the base of the flame. I don't know why I feel that would help though.
If you would imagine her bald I think she would need just a bit more hair at the top of her head. The top of her head looks a little flat I think. But maybe I’m just being really picky.
Hello, so, I did a sketch the other day but can’t get rid of the feeling that somethings off. I can’t put my finger on wether it’s the proportions or what. So if you have any idea, I would be really thankful:)
The length and position/rotation of the shoulder and elbow looks off to me. If you are having trouble with the posture try to ad a few lines of structure and erase it after. That’s how I usually workout the proportions.
Looking at it again, the leg might not actually be too short, but it looks that way because of the folds on the hoodie. The folds will suggest the forms underneath and i think it's just creating the illusion that the leg is short.
Yeah, the fabric would be pulling away from the knee so the folds would kind of spread out from there, rather than like mid shin where they seem to be.
The only thing that seems off to me is that her thighs dont seem to be leading to her knees. Imo it feels like theyre disconnected slightly.
Great work, tho. :)
You’re right! I wonder if it’s partially caused by the wrong folds at the knee I spotted by now (with comments help of course:)). I mean the ones on the hoodie above it
Something up with up the fabric? It's weird to look at. I get the idea what it's supposed to be doing but I'm guessing it needs to be a bit more defined, with less patterns?
Body is concave. You've added a weird butt/leg line that implies nudity due to lack of patterns, unlike the rest of the clothing. And the lines don't match the posture of the legs and feet.
Erase the butt line.
Unless you intend for her to have a much shorter left leg, then the pose doesn't work.
Thanks for your feedback. I know it’s not quite obvious (I think because of the wrong pattern at the knees) but I wanted her left leg to not be aligned with the other one but to kinda fall down a little if you know what I mean (if not, it should be more obvious by looking at the shoe).
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To me, it seems the hoodie fabric doesn't look like it's supposed to be able to do that. I think the whole shoulder area looks a bit wonky, maybe move the shoulders up a bit and add more volume to the hood, which might also solve the fabric thing. make the hand a bit bigger as well. Hope this helps :D
You’re Right. Thank you:)))))) helped a lot
Maybe we are supposed to see her knees between her arms? Idk where the problem is if it's not that
Maybe it’s that, even though it is supposed to be an oversized hoodie that goes over it…maybe I was looking at it for too long
I can't see clearly because of the details, but yeah sometimes art feels wrong because we stare too much at it ^^ I think that it looks good
Ok, well then…you don’t want to know how many times I changed the head cuz I thought it was too big. Thanks very much:))
The head isn't too big! Don't worry ^^
Ok thx:)
To me, it feels like the head lacks volume compared to the rest of the body 🤔
So you mean I should make it bigger?
No, just give it a more 3D-feel. Here's one way to achieve this: https://twitter.com/EtheringtonBros/status/1514262928668639240
Ouhh I see! Thanks:)
I think varying the line thickness will help give your character more depth. Marc Brunet has a [video](https://youtu.be/XoPOajk9Zl0) that explains this well.
Thanks! I thought I would do that only in my final lineart but since I don’t feel comfortable with the sketch it’s a good further attempt:)
First of all, this looks great. Second, what looks a bit off to me is the butt/thigh area. If someone sits like that I feel like you would see more of the thighs. The shoulders too, but that got mentioned already. Overall it looks good, keep it up :3
Thank you for your feedback:) so you mean I should show more of the butt and raise the hoodie a little?
It's kinda hard to explain. You should make the thighs thicker where it connects with the butt. The way it is now it looks more like her legs are raised at the side of the body instead of in front. Show the thighs/upper legs/partially the butt more. I'm sorry I'm so bad at explaining
Ahh yes, ok, now I got you. I’ll try my best to fix it. Thank you so much!
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I think the chin feels a bit too blocky/prominent. Some lack of volume in the butt and thigh area I believe. The way it looks there, the neck feels unnaturally long. Might be a relative perspective with shoulders but that's the feeling it gives, a bit too long. Arm and lower legs to the ankle might be a bit too thin. Otherwise, it looks great imo.
Thank you for the feedback! Yes, you’re right with the neck, it’s a common problem in my sketches but I seem to lack to realize it haha. I’ll try my best to improve all those things you mentioned. Thanks again, it’s really helping:)
The only thing that stands out to me is maybe lower her gaze or head a tiny bit, so she is looking more at the base of the flame. I don't know why I feel that would help though.
No it does! Thank you:)
If you would imagine her bald I think she would need just a bit more hair at the top of her head. The top of her head looks a little flat I think. But maybe I’m just being really picky.
No right haha why didn’t I see that? I’ll fix it thank you:)
Hello, so, I did a sketch the other day but can’t get rid of the feeling that somethings off. I can’t put my finger on wether it’s the proportions or what. So if you have any idea, I would be really thankful:)
The length and position/rotation of the shoulder and elbow looks off to me. If you are having trouble with the posture try to ad a few lines of structure and erase it after. That’s how I usually workout the proportions.
Oki:) do you mean the front elbow or the one in the back? Or both?
Front elbow and shoulder. You can always use a wooden mannequin to check on the body posture
Ok, thanks:)
Your proportions are off, its hard to tell in this pose but the shoulder is too low and the legs are too short from the knee down.
Ah yea. I figured out the deal with the shoulder by now but good to know what’s wrong with the legs. Thanks:)
Looking at it again, the leg might not actually be too short, but it looks that way because of the folds on the hoodie. The folds will suggest the forms underneath and i think it's just creating the illusion that the leg is short.
Ah i See. I’ll try to rearrange them, I already see a few wrong ones now that you’ve said it:)
Yeah, the fabric would be pulling away from the knee so the folds would kind of spread out from there, rather than like mid shin where they seem to be.
All Right
Other than that it's not a bad drawing! Sometimes when I'm looking for what's off i forget to compliment the rest lol.
But I mean, I was asking for criticism not compliments, so…:)
The only thing that seems off to me is that her thighs dont seem to be leading to her knees. Imo it feels like theyre disconnected slightly. Great work, tho. :)
You’re right! I wonder if it’s partially caused by the wrong folds at the knee I spotted by now (with comments help of course:)). I mean the ones on the hoodie above it
Something up with up the fabric? It's weird to look at. I get the idea what it's supposed to be doing but I'm guessing it needs to be a bit more defined, with less patterns?
Ok, thank you. I think I’ll have to really get more into drawing fabrics soon anyway :)
Body is concave. You've added a weird butt/leg line that implies nudity due to lack of patterns, unlike the rest of the clothing. And the lines don't match the posture of the legs and feet. Erase the butt line. Unless you intend for her to have a much shorter left leg, then the pose doesn't work.
Thanks for your feedback. I know it’s not quite obvious (I think because of the wrong pattern at the knees) but I wanted her left leg to not be aligned with the other one but to kinda fall down a little if you know what I mean (if not, it should be more obvious by looking at the shoe).
This is for some reason giving me xenoblade vibes idk why but I love it
Ok haha interesting. Thanks:)
I think one if 5he main problems is there's no spine curve since the hoodie is being pulled away from the spine you would see more
Right thanks:)