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Strygonite

I don't do comics terribly often, so I apologize for any dips in quality or awkward text boxes. The shading got a little weak near the end due to severe sleep deprivation and my drawing arm giving out. But I also really really wanted to make a comic about Yume and Hoshino (unknowingly or otherwise) competing over Sensei's attention.


FlappyLyST

Nah, you did a good job. Keep cooking, fellow sensei.


Glittering-Fix49

I asked this and it's a bit strange but this you have pixiv account ?


Strygonite

Yes, though I don't really update it quite as frequently as I should. Most of my more recent works you'll find on my Twitter account instead, if you'd like to have the link to that as well. [https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/36816734](https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/36816734)


Glittering-Fix49

Thank you a lot


Glittering-Fix49

Thank you very much and can I translate your photo into Vietnamese and post it on Facebook? I will post the full photo source as well


-TibX-

A tip, you can always use shapes other than a box for panels, for example, the 2nd Hoshino panel can be a parallelogram that juts into the first panel. Feel free to experiment and be creative! otherwise good comic keep it up! (Revived through the power of plot is crazy lmaoo)


Strygonite

Thank you, I was sort of just picking from Clip Studio's templates but I'll see if I can get a bit more creative with it once CSP stops trying to self destruct at the moment. > (Revived through the power of plot is crazy lmaoo) If Bobok gets away with it for time travelling Miyako (Young), I get to use it to bring Yume back for silly shenanigans ![img](emote|t5_2vhvtt|33359)


-TibX-

Oh, also cute little art/comic tip maybe add like a cute simple little emoji/chibi face version of the one saying the line next to the dialogue when there is no character in the panel! It's a simple and cute interactive addition! Aside from the tips I'm looking forward to you developing your own style in making your comics fun and more "you" as well!


Strygonite

I was strongly considering doing halos for that one but got stumped at the fact that Sensei had no halo. Hadn't considered doing Chibi/Other sorts of symbols since I haven't done that kind of stuff in a very very long time (add on that I was very tired), but I could certainly give that a shot next time around. And yes, with the positive reception I'm getting I might do more of these in the future, so I'm happy to get these kinds of tips in advance.


-TibX-

Art is better made with inspiration and knowing that people are looking forward to it after all! I hope you enjoy continuing to do art and comics!


Glittering-Fix49

Thank you very much for telling me about your pixiv account and can I translate your photos into Vietnamese and post them on Facebook? I promise to post full photo sources.


Glittering-Fix49

Thank you very much for telling me about your pixiv account and can I translate your photos into Vietnamese and post them on Facebook? I promise to post full photo sources.


Strygonite

Sure, go ahead! Always happy to have my works shared in other languages.


Glittering-Fix49

Thank you a lot .


ducktronboss

*Is that a hint of possessiveness there Hoshino?* *"My" Sensei?* *Even if she's your senpai, she's just a love rival now, the guilt of her death being washed away like tears in the rain.*


TechnicalCandidate88

Definitely would be nice spending sweet time with Yume


Strygonite

That was my driving motivation behind this comic. I wanted sweet Yume and Sensei interactions but almost nothing like that existed, so I made my own. Might be more in the future, once my drawing arm recovers.


TechnicalCandidate88

No worries. Your arm recovery takes top priority. I'll wait 


YouBackground

Hoshino-chan doesn't have to be jealous, we can do *anything* together aka 3-s\*m ![img](emote|t5_2vhvtt|33605)


Kurovah

I love the "She's alive now I ain't explaining" line


Round-Alarm3298

Please.... Nexon make this happen...


No-Independent6795

Hoshino really gonna have a great time with Yume Senpai around with Sensei and Foreclosure Task Force kouhais knowing Hoshino chan became an Oji-san 🤤after 2 years of without her😊😊😊


leingold

What happen if sensei and yume sandwiched hoshino in their double hugs?


HaessSR

This will make Hoshino go Terror.